Webnovel Author: Mael_Scarp - Novel Collection

first of all he doesn't have an advantage because his memories only come when he gets hit in the head, second then there is no need for him to introduce firearms, although there are hopes of cannons or grenades and the like, third, first we it shows a brave and strategic young general, but then it shows us a weak general, incompetent and I don't understand the last thing, if his soldiers have armor, experience, he can finish him off but he decides to be a hostage, pathetic. Although I know what you want to get with the problems you face although it is good but it does not fit much.

well, I've already read it, quite good, normal reaction of any person, and although personally I don't like the idea of ​​changing too much or altering history, since personally I always feel that pride of those great characters of antiquity, whether they are bad or good ones have contributed to human civilization, I would also recommend not building a kingdom directly since the world population of people is estimated between 4 million to 5 million, in addition to transportation problems, and those big problem things that all ancient kingdoms have and empire but the idea of ​​building a city-state to be part of a nobility and I don't know more, another idea would be the domestication of animals that will become extinct in the future, another would be about the landscapes of the world, since in thousands of years it has changed slightly an example would be doggerland, and the last one would be to witness the creations of the ancient kingdoms or ancient civilizations, as a writer you know the great demand for ideas and imagination. ón, since there is little registration you can create it to a situation that you want. I wish you can finish it so that I can satisfy my curiosity. And good luck to you.