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Wow, thank for this very great chapter ! Use the smoke ... I so love this strategy

Thanks for this incredible chapter

Thank for this chapter author !

Merci pour ce super chapitre !

When the new chapter !!! I so love this story

Thanks for this great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, because the first chapters are incredible! I'm just afraid that he will become overpowered quickly... Don't underestimate the power of other adventurers. Even simple level 2 or 3 is powerful, because it trains for years with this level. In fact, I'm not afraid of the hero becoming overpowered. I'm afraid that you will lessen/diminish the strength of others. I really like the character's mentality, his thoughts... Can't wait to see how far you'll go. you have my author stones! It’s your story, tell it! (Sorry for my english, I'm French)

No worries, I was just pointing out a common mistake in fanfiction ^^ Thank you for considering my comment

No, you are wrong author. we cannot improve our chakra affinities. they are like our natural talents in ninjutsu, where we are strongest. However, anyone can use a jutsu without having the affinity for it! Someone without the fire affinity can use the great fireball! But on the other hand, it will take him a lot more time to learn it, it will consume more chakra... It's just not optimized. Ninjas focus on strengths.

Wow. It's real power of the marine admiral

Thanks for this very great chapter !!!

Thank for this great chapter ! Oh future snake invocation?

J'aimerai tellement que barbe blanche meurt. Que pour une fois, il bouleverse quelque chose. The death avec withe barb !

Wow, thank for this integrate chapter. If they aren't cultivation and divin culture in this Naruto world, okay. I'm intrigating by the mix of chi and chakra

Wow, thank for this chapter !!!!

Thank for this greet chapter !!!!

Merci pour le chapitre. Question ! La peau verte n'était pas visible avec ses blessures ? Comment la prêtresse a réussi à le guérir sans voir qu'il était un gobelin ?

Merci pour cette histoire magnifique ^^ J'ai hâte de voir la suite de cette histoire tellement originale comparée aux autres fictions. Attendre ne dérange ici personne si le résultat qui en ressort est d'une qualité aussi belle

hello author, thank you for all these very detailed chapters! Just a big mistake when you talk about Kakashi. The Kakashi with small reserves of chakra... it's at the beginning of Naruto 😅 Even as a child, he had sick reserves for a child (a reason why he was called genius). And then in Shipuden, until the war against Madara, Kakashi's reserves will explode with continued intensive training. For example during the war, you see kakashi spam Shidori and other ninjutsu without problem. And better! Where at the beginning of Shippuden using his Mangeyku would KO him, at the end he can spam his eye techniques. So if ! Kakashi now has monstrous reserves! He just worked a lot and it's practiced. I guess after Minato died, he never did any intensive training! PS. I'm french, i'm sorry for this english level

Le chapitre a un problème;-; Il est en double 😅 Mais par contre, j'ai lâché une petite larme. Je prie dans mon coeur pour que le père ne meurt pas 😭