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Who said that Itachi is a proud man?? He's just a traitor who thinks he's a hero

No, I haven't read it. What a stupid question

Bad narration as if the hero is telling his story in the past I did and I fought and then I took a shower Why is there no interaction like pov

The story was interesting at first, but in the later chapters it began to focus on very boring dialogues, such as the dialogue between the team of Orochimaru, Jiraiya and Tsunade, readers are not interested in cementing the relationship of MC with characters not in the story such as Nomad and Castos, and we do not care about the discussion of the Sand Village Senate Keep it brief. We don't watch anime we read so you have to shorten the sub-topics that mc is not a part of

The reason for low ratings is not that he is weak but stupid and puts himself in embarrassing situations he keeps complaining about being weak but he doesn't try to train he has a tenseigan and doesn't try to find out or train for it he just goes and takes a mission he knows what's going on and yet he risks his life for no benefit he just goes back to the village and continues His life always thought he wanted to steal a jutsu or do something for the future, but he goes to shiver and cry and gets close to death and then Jiraya or Orochimaru falls from the sky to save him

I don't understand why he explains and explains to the old man and why he even needs to make up a story. Is he afraid that he won't accept him? Just give him electric shocks and he won't ask again why he's looking for excuses.

Everyone has his assumptions that he stepped down from the position of Hokage for fear of death, just an assumption from you, the writer did not show us any reason or goal for Hiruzen's actions, even when he caused a disaster, he was not intentional, and in the end he died while protecting Konoha, this weakens your assumption that he is a coward, but Orochimaru himself admitted that if Hiruzen was 10 years younger than he won against him. This means that for the 10 years we watched him, he was a period of low strength and we can't judge him only from her.

I don't understand why he left his mother alive and now Madara loves his mother, is there a need to add this disgusting part I also don't understand why it's related to someone who is not related to him Are you born without a mother So you are looking for tenderness

The character of the hero is awful. He thanks and apologizes more than necessary. I also don't understand anything why he helps the two girls. I won't complain if he helps them without losing anything. But he humiliates himself and exposes himself to Freya with all submission and humiliation. I also don't like MC background. He is the son of a whore. The disaster is that his mother is alive

Yes, I agree with you that he is not strict and yet he is portrayed in fan fiction as a man hungry for power and willing to kill everyone to remain the Hokage.

I told you Hiruzen is not a perfect man. He's just someone who made mistakes, but he's not weak. He was nicknamed in his youth, god of shinobi, like Hashirama and Hagoromo.

The summary of the story says that he is a disciplined marine, but when I started reading, he acts like the annoying teenage kids we see in the movies. What he does, but then he became Batman who talks to him and knows his origin and became a mc idiot. I don't think a playboy like him would be good at dealing with girls

Minato was the Hokage at the time. Do you want to leave everything to Hiruzen as he did not consult Hiruzen before performing the Seal skill Hiruzen proved his loyalty when he chose to sacrifice himself in order to escape Tobirama even when he got the title of Hokage was deserved so I hope you change your look to Hiruzen. You only hate him because he wasn't a perfect guy

What the hell do you write Madara in the avatar but no Rinnegan, no jutsu, no skill, no element, only fire element, no Mangekyou Sharingan, what do you think about taking off his Sharingan? You should also know that the strength of the Naruto world lies in the diversity of power in it and you gave it The weakest element in Naruto is fire. The fire element does not kill any character in Naruto because it is used mostly as a defense to repel the enemy's advance. He does not even have the character Madara. He just says that he does not want to harm people so that Ang does not take a wrong look at him, even though Ang was not even born as she is. Full of silly comedy, the kind that you don't read, the crime you committed in Madara's character not even Tobirama sir writer I'm sure Madara cries blood in hell

People's taste is bad when they praise this work, although some things are taken from another work, but you made it better than another work, such as removing Chinese phrases such as "I am your father", but on the other hand, you may be one of the worst people to write fight scenes so that I forgot how hard I worked. I sleep while reading and I forgot how many paragraphs I passed without even reading it, and the decisions that MC makes are very stupid, even though I read this. I still don't know whether MC is strong or weak because you exaggerate a lot in his skills and when fighting, I don't know who hit the other in the first place and the basis of the story is already as bad as a goddess I gave him Naruto and his body. I was hoping that he would rise to find himself in another world with Naruto and put it upon himself to reveal the secret of his existence in this world.

Really bad story I don't understand why the writer makes it so difficult for MC even though it's very simple MC completely neglects the training of Madara's strength and Shinigami strength and focuses on cultivation and ends up losing consciousness in a fight if you don't want to focus on Madara's strength or Shinigami then don't Give two misleading titles and don't say you have to reach chapter 1000 to show techniques like fire ball or any of the five elements

You keep making mc use the Sharingan for trivial matters and because it shows a lot, it becomes boring and predictable. And provoking his enemies in a childish way like (what did you guys hear a dog barking) I also see as a viewer that MC does not have any privacy or ambiguity, which reminds you that MC is from another world and knows the future, which in turn gives you suspense and looking forward to the next as you spoil it more in the future You complicate things a lot Although it does not require that

I don't understand why all writers hate Hiruzen so much, even if he didn't try hard to protect the Uchiha or prevent Danzo from committing crimes, yet he did his duty perfectly and died protecting Konoha. But if the problem is that he did not take care of Naruto, it is because he is busy like Naruto in the era of peace, he could not see his family at all, so how do you expect Hiruzen and Hua Hokage to do in the era of the Cold War

Why did you ruin it 😭😭 why did you make her incest that makes it so unreasonable and difficult to accept and forced always artifacts ruined by hentai or romance

Another stupid mc. Nothing new. Hasty. He doesn't deserve to write a story for him, just as you don't show in your narration how the world works around him.