this deserves 5 stars just for the author following jojo stand themes of being named after a song......................................................
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Oh please great Tobi-Sama, Please grant these mere mortal's with your tales. Even if we haven't deserved to hear such great tales I beg of thy to provide at least 1 more.
Two opponents who are in equal strength zone were now clashing to decide the future of the entire planet. What would happen? who would win? find out in the next chapter which will never be released due to Tobi being a D*ck
Anime & Comics · Tobi_or_Not_to_be
thank you for telling me what you thought. I never noticed that I had done this before as I was just going with the flow of my writing so i will definitely try and improve myself.
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I love this so much. Not only is there a great story line so far but it keeps me wanting to come back for more. Jaune is OP for the world of remnant but I'm expecting he wont stay there permanently like when he went to Danmanchi. Jaune as a character as a good personality, isn't over confidant as he knows he isnt the strongest in the multiverse and he's not one of those harem protagonists that are just interested in a girls body like heck, the only one he love's so far is Scathach. If this turns into a harem with like 5-12 girls i'll probably rate it at a 4.5 just because of my personal preference but right now the story is perfect and I can't wait for more PS; I would give an extra .5 stars if i could for making aurther pendragon a male while training Jaune
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Cant wait for the next chapter
She knew this was really the end.
Anime & Comics · EternalKings
Hey guys just wanted to say feel free to give me some feedback on this! it's my first time writing a novel so feel free to write a reply
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Wow a 5 star review from the author, what a surprise! Honest, so far with being 3 real chapters in at 5 more planned I think this fanfic so far is about 4. Mainly because of update stability as I have work and also taking summer classes for college so its a little iffy. Please note about the bee movie script, it is there purely for word count and will be removed once I pass 15k words written myself. I just want to know what you guys think and where I could improve in my writing
The Broken Veil [Percy Jackson Story]
Book&Literature · Mikaza