I really like how this paragraph was written! I enjoy the pacing and wording used in this novel a lot O.O might take some pointers
He released them from the invisible dark bands of superiority. The gruelling power finally gave them the luxury of breathing once more. It felt like they'd been hauled into the fiery engine of a hot air balloon for about three hours.
Fantasy · funkiller_562
I am on it :)
ch 83 Chapter 83: New tactics (I)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
This is public, not for personal use
ch 0 3 Chapter: 03 - Moving Forward (I)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
thank you! planning to keep updating even if a bit sporadic currently
ch 10 Chapter 10: Dante (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
goodnight you
ch 55 Chapter 55: Indecisive
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
Is this where you are at XD?
ch 55 Chapter 55: Indecisive
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
Thank you BlackRose, I Appreciate it. I know I am unreliable with releasing chapters, but I do have 3 new chapters coming throughout tonight and tomorrow. might just release them all at once, since the wait has been long.
ch 79 Chapter 79: Nobles and Commoners (I) The Young Duke
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
I know how it is I am the same when reading XD I hope it won't disappoint
ch 21 Chapter 21: To the North (I)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
It is no secret, but it is not apparent right away. I will answer here hopefully no one takes it as a spoiler. Rayden is the Male lead. and there is no doubt about it as the story progresses.
ch 21 Chapter 21: To the North (I)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
nice!
ch 79 Chapter 79: Nobles and Commoners (I) The Young Duke
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
Thank you, glad you liked it
ch 36 Chapter 36: War Council (0.5) Extra
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
no its ok, idk which acct u using don't want you to post it here, I'll type in hall til you see it
ch 0 2 Chapter: 02 - First Steps (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
Sethos - 370
ch 0 2 Chapter: 02 - First Steps (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
ok ill join 370
ch 0 2 Chapter: 02 - First Steps (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
then would you like me to message in RC?
ch 0 2 Chapter: 02 - First Steps (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
ok you too
ch 0 2 Chapter: 02 - First Steps (II)
LGBT+ · Rain_Corn
I started this a couple of days ago and got to read several chapters. I am impressed by the level of writing quality. The writer has perfect word plays and there are barely any grammar issues. The flow is good, and it is easy to figure out which POV the reader is currently reading. This is worth trying out!! There are also plenty of chapters so the writer is serious about publishing which is a significant plus for me.
My boyfriend can control the darkness
Fantasy · funkiller_562