As a story its pretty good although the main character could Be included a bit more, I get that you love the original plot but you could add a bit more originality, the whole myu arc kinda got skipped which I don’t really like that you did that but whatever I Like that you did it in a funny way so it’s ok. Otherwise the story is pretty good I hope you counting making chapters
Anime & Comics · Gentinon
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As a story its pretty good although the main character could Be included a bit more, I get that you love the original plot but you could add a bit more originality, the whole myu arc kinda got skipped which I don’t really like that you did that but whatever I Like that you did it in a funny way so it’s ok. Otherwise the story is pretty good I hope you counting making chapters
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Anime & Comics · Gentinon