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2022-01-09 Se unió United States

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Honestly this story has a lot of potential but it’s terribly written. The author just writes with no soul and no heart. Idk if this is MTL edited or what but the writing is very boring, monotone, and repetitive. The main character is just boring and I can’t see anything special about her. I’m uninterested in her life and what she accomplished because it’s just repeated every chapter in a different way. The writimg itself is the worst part because it feels like I’m reading a history book. Just gives you information again and again with nothing to keep you readimg. Just terribly monotone and boring writimg

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How many times do you have to repeat it each chapter? We get it shes not normal she’s a warrior with relentless drive destined for greatness

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The last three paragraphs of every chapter are just repeats with the same exact things said different ways

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She’s been doimg this for a while and all of a sudden she needs shield? She can hack and get the info she wants from other sources. This is just forced plot

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The story is really good but it doesnt feel natural. Its very formal and feels monotone

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