Webnovel Author: Jackleell - Fanfic Collection

I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.

I don't really care much for the system, even though it annoys me. However, I would suggest that you rewrite the chapters. I would enjoy this book very much because English is my third language, but the one I've spoken most in my life. It hurts my head reading the first few chapters."

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All these Harry Potter fanfics are unimaginative. They always end up at the school and never try to do something other than attending school learning or teaching there. It always bored me to death, which is why I stopped reading any kind of Harry Potter books.

Why is he trying so hard to gain a reputation when they already know he's a king? Why does he bow to the princess all the time when that's how he presented himself to them? It's stupid.

this is one of the best fanfic out there, but its update is so slow it took 1 year for 30 chapters it's kind of sad +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I couldn't get past the first chapter even though I would like to read this novel. My head hurts from reading it. You know, there are a lot of tools out there to help with writing if your English isn't good, like Grammarly if you want to write by yourself, or ChatGPT to fix errors, etc. And the systems are stupid. Why would anyone want a system? I'm starting to get annoyed with all these system novels. Some are good, but people don't have the imagination to create their own skills for their characters and just copy-paste skills from every anime, movie, etc. It's so boring.

Man, this story would have been good, but you just sped through everything, and the spelling is awful. Maybe use ChatGPT and copy-paste your words, and just say 'revised version with corrected grammar,' and tada, it will fix all your writing with no added things, just the way you wrote it but much better.

"OMG, this is AI-generated. I don't mind it, but man, when you know the AI writing style, you can't enjoy the story because it feels off and lacks a human touch. You just give the AI a rough idea and make it write the whole story. It feels so annoying to read.

Lol, I read the whole novel, 16 chapters, and so far, it's bad. The names on web novels are always different from what's expected. Even the R.O.B thought he was stupid for picking a god because he had too much responsibility. So far, all I see is an arrogant MC just because he became a god. Sorry for pissing you off because I criticized your new favorite novel. Lol.

Okay, the "Asian" thing—this kind of racism is what I hate about Chinese novels. They think they are above everyone. But what's funny is that race is not defined by color, but by nature. By nature, we are all human. We are not insects or animals who only follow their instincts.

Why would anyone choose to be a god in Marvel? It's so stupid. I don't mind it that much, but it's boring as hell. I will keep reading, but if I change my mind after a few more chapters, I will rewrite this review.

Okay, I'm not going to get into too much detail on this novel because I don't want to spoil it for people, but I'm on chapter 10. Man, does this guy love collecting female leads. There are about 20—I'm not sure, I lost count, maybe more, maybe less. Oh man, this story feels fun to read, but this kid is collecting women left and right, and he's only 9 years old so far. There is no time skip, and it's getting on my nerves now.

Dude, you’re deleting my valid review for no reason. I gave you a good review earlier, but you’re just mad because I told the truth.