and dropped. last sentences ruined this whole story
ch 31 The Actual Task [1]
Fantasy · wondering_boson_04
yeah dropped. the whole trope is overused and boring. its the same old same old with just a different setting
"You cannot use our last name, or it will be obvious that it's you," Valentina said, staring at Dante, who had already understood what she meant.
Fantasy · Katanexy
thx for the heads up
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Movies · UchihaFamily
going so hard into the gamer stuff is slowly ruining the story. it feels like its all about the gamer and it takes away from the actual story. normally people use the gamer as a way to power scale the character upwards. I would recommend to keep the skills he can get and that system but pull back on the id creates and having to hide his powers. the gamer stuff is just getting in the way now. in all honesty all his powers and weapons he got should have correlated to posiedon so he didn't have to hide anything
ch 73 Chapter 73
Movies · UchihaFamily
sitting in a tent in any remotely hot place during the day is absolute torture. dudes cooking himselt
As the hours went by I continued doing my usual routine, basically eating pringles cans in my tent while reading some books I had grabbed before I had left from camp. Then at the edge of my sight I caught onto something huge birds with a wingspan spamming 4 meters, sharp claws and beaks.
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
I'm out. literally destorying everything good about jjk
ch 54 End of Volume 1: Hidden Invetory XI: Repercussions
Anime & Comics · David_555
I don't like this big bad guy. it just feels kinda ughh
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The begining
Book&Literature · nutsofthechest
just kill Issei. you are neutering your own story. no one is gonna stick around if your gonna make every pay 100s of chapters away.
ch 49 Chapter 49: Chaos And Prelude OF The Game.
Anime & Comics · Ahilash_Danie
tbf, the people who have read absurd amounts tend to very rarely give 5 stars. alot of it feels the same as other stories. and you sometimes see spots that can clearly improve. like a very large amount of stories have tons of dungeon chapters with 0 plot progression and they fall into the habit of writing fights for the sake of it.
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Fantasy · CAESAR20