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I agree wholeheartedly. This new character has really changed anything, and isn’t even starting on his own team. There’s a reason people don’t talk about sixth men, CAUSE THEY SIT ON THE BENCH. No one wants to read about Izuki the starting pg playing his ass off while mc is sitting on the bench giving ‘advice’ to the coach. I get mc has high bball iq, but not having a scouting report for a single team and relying on this guy is ridiculous.

TLDR: grammar is trash, but story is conveyed despite this I’m not entirely sure if this is a translated piece or stolen or whatever, but it seems fine, at least for this website, except for one thing: Grammar. It’s not a problem of conveying imagery or descriptions, but the amount of elipsis is a little ridiculous, especially in the Grayfia bits. Also capitalization is an issue as well, punctuation too.

Stop lying

I really enjoyed this story. It has an interesting premise, good writing, good? characters. However, this ‘no harem’ stuff is complete cap. This is definitely a harem. Polygamy is essentially what’s happening, and besides maybe one girl I got no clue why they all like him. It seems like the main character will continue this harem route, and I’m fine with that. Just no false advertising.

It’s a harem what are you talking about

I’m crying here, no harem my ass. He lied to all of us.

I have no clue what the heck is going on with this fanfic, bro writes like he forget what third grade is. Capitalize? What’s that? Seems interesting but I am not rotting my brain on promise alone. Grammar is 🫠 Yyggggygyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Story is ok, but the most annoying part is Catherine the ai that Dave has. She isn’t endearing at all, and doesn’t add anything meaningful to the story. All she does is insult Dave. I wish he could turn her off. Ggggggggggggg

This is the best web novel I’ve ever read. The writing is great, the story is great, I can actually remember the characters. If all webnovels were like this, maybe I’d spend more time on this site.