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Haha yea this was my first time writting so looking back its a little messy but I’m getting better I think [img=recommend]

Not super into romance but the story was pretty good regardless and the characters were all decent. I love the depth there is to the world, although it was pretty hard to comprehend hearing it all so suddenly; Keep up the good work!

It started off a little rough and fast but once I read a little more it got a lot better. Besides the beginning I love everything overall and I don’t have many complaints to say for this one.

Not somebody who’s really into romance really but I still found this one entertaining, mainly at the mcs complete incel behavior having some of the dumbest (in a good way) and comedic narration I’ve read lately; I probably won’t read further cause romance isn’t really my thing but the work itself is decent in my opinion.

Pretty fun read so far, I love the world mainly but the characters have also been pretty decent along with everything else so far in my opinion. Keep up the great work!

This story is pretty decent but for me at least it’s hard to read, I’m probably being nitpicky here but half the time I don’t know if someone is talking or if it’s just narration and also sometimes it’s hard to know who’s talking. Minus grammar related issues though I think the concept is cool and the characters are decent.

This one has a neat concept but it feels a little bogged down by the grammar, I found the story to be interesting but I could never immerse myself since I constantly had to think about the grammar. I think the concept is decent along with the story, this definitely has big potential though.

This story has been pretty neat so far imo; romance isn’t exactly my favorite genre but it was executed fine here. I like that the narration speaks to the main character a lot but god it got awful to read, i appreciate what its doing but every sentence reads like massive hyperbole and it got a bit tiring, still though i enjoyed my Time with it so far.

Finished the 9 chapters currently out so far and I’ve had a fun time on this one, there’s nothing very new here but it’s all done pretty well in my opinion; would’ve been nice if the protagonists past life was more involved here but regardless keep pushing out chapters for this one it’s really good!

I havent read super far yet but this has been some good material so far. I love the detailed natration that really lets you get in the characters head and the plot and pacing. I will definitely keep reading this one.

Overall I thInk the story is pretty neat; I found somethings to be pretty weird though like the random shifts from 3rd person to 1st person and some of the grammar was a bit off. The concept of the story is really cool though and I like the protags current mental struggle.