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I don't understand why this novel is rated 4.8. I enjoy the story, but the English is bad and the grammar is all over the place. I don't understand how this novel could be more than 3 stars. It does nothing new compared to other Naruto fanfic novels

MC, top of his class, given a garbage starter but girls think he's cool. somehow this garbage pokemon beats other pokemon because plot armor. He refuses help in his journey from rich parents. he usually just contradicts himself and whst he says throughout the story. Nothing special about this story. oh and Oak snaked him on good starters but he still fed oak ground breaking research for the free.

Random lines of dialogue are in badly translated Japanese. Couldn't even get past the first chapter. just shit.

If you are looking for a fanfic with plot, then this isn't it. This fanfic is simply a wish fulfillment novel. No plots whatsoever, just mc doing whatever he wants.

Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.

I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

I am extremely disappointed. 1/4 of the chapter are repites. He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.

MC is always manipulated and is a extremely idiotic person with a extremely bad personality. Translation for free chapters are excellent. After the free chapter, it went downhill. It is still readable but not as consistent as the free chapters. For example, his first summon is called "yellow" then became "ah Huang" or it was called"yellow scarf soldier to "yellow bandana". it will rattle your reading immersion a little bit.

Chapter 3 and he become a literally Motherfu**er ........... WHY? WHY must he Fu** his Mother? From 100.000 possible love scenarios you must make him a Motherfu**er

Chapter 2 MC got Raped and couldn´t defend against a drugt woman ...... congratulate you made the most pathetic MC in History ...... and on top he is also stubid

Well.. its just meh. The Development and Char design is not really visible in the first chapters. Some might say that this is a bit rushed as a review but I couldnt stand the writing of the novel. Its just ... plain. No engaging or writing with depth.

There is way too much filler of over explaining and rewriting scenes that already happened. Also too many characters points of view makes it disjointed. Having so many side character side stories when the MC hasnt even done anything yet is just stretching chapters out and not progressing the story.

Sudden girlfriend without any build up. It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The mc only talks to Chinese charecters. There are also poor translations.

The Mc wants just smut ..... all he wants is f**k with 100 or more women ..... Mci throw away all reason or principles if he sees a woman .... and somethings are just random decisions

Get to the point. 5000 words and the story is at the excat same point. Entire chapters are complete useless because nothing habens. Waiting one week just to get a chapter that describes the landscape.

Why did mc become friends with this girl, he is not the type to manipulate people, she is just a burden to him. stupid mc, beta mc, mc acting with his emotions, mc without brain.

his story has a great plot that starts pretty good. The main character is interesting and fun to read about. The plot is intriguing with good background info and lots of details. That however is also the issue. There is so much detail that a single conversation with an irrelevant character irrelevant to the actual plot will take several chapters. Most recently the MC had a conversation about a deal that lasted around 10 chapters that easily could have been summed up in a few paragraphs. while this story had started out great, it unfortunately evolved into a money hungry author that will do anything to stretch what little content he has as far as he can, delaying the story progression for weeks if not months at a time.

So the MC is executed while the people that he wanted to save cheered at it and the first thing he is concerned is that he cant help some random guy. I have the same opinion as the demon ...The MC is trash, he is the stubid "I will save everyone even if they spit in my face or betray me because im the braindead hero"

if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info)