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I couldn't go through the third chapter: time skip, wording make no sense, and spelling mistakes are enormous (there are zero edditing btw).

The writting is quite often messy: words are missing, sometimes there are no link between paragraphs, changement of POV is also done without tansition, etc... it lacks a lot of edditing... so it is confusing. Story is bit meh and the plot very slow paced. It's clearly over rated and really need a rewrite!

Completly unrealistic and progressively frustrating. Author makes everything unfair for the MC. The system already makes the figths with monsters unfair on purpose, but as its part of the goldenfinger, why not, yet Author decided to make MC's life miserable for no reason. For example, MC kills 10 rank 2 enemies at some point during an examination, and another person from a rich familly kills much more enemies. Thes dude is already pissed by the sole existence of the MC (classical chineese character). Yet, MC finishes first place (I didnt get either why he scored first at the written exam reading how stressed and uncultered he was): why was he first? By the way the power level is overly complicated explained. Anyway, rich dude is thus angered and triggered. Arriving at the academy, the rich dude brother, high level by the way, forces the MC to kneel, and forbid anyone to interact/help with the MC. Why? For no reason, and this was written in a forced, cringed and stupid way. If he is above the law, why not kill the MC? Ridiculous. Worse, MC had his memories altered, and you can guess it very early. But Author forced MC to sell his house just to have his memory checked AGAIN??? This is so retarded lol... MC only goes to the academy only to find the girl in his dreams. He could have becomed stronger by fighting in dungeons and getting answers progressively when his memories are unlocked, but no, he went to a place filled by young masters and gets humillated every chapters. It's the kind of novel where everything is against the MC just because the Author doesn't know how to write a proper story, so don't waste your time here, it's cringe and stupid af and you will waste your time!

A huge deception... After some point, MC is just useless in his schemes, as if all his knowledge from his previous life amounts to nothing in face of some secondary characters, and instead of improving, MC continue to run into walls. This is mainly because the Author has changed the focus of the story from the MC to other characters. This starts at chapter 82, when a secondary character is introduced with a more detailled background than the MC, for 9 chapters... This makes the novel very frustrating to read and it's a huge disapointement, because the first chapters were absolutly great. After this character is introduced c82, we read less and less about the MC and he makes more and more mistakes / underestimates others. I continued to binge read up to 100 more chapters, and then skiped to the last chapters, and I'm glad I did because nothing changed in the MC behavior to the point that his journey ends while the character introduced c82 still lives. What a farce!