Bleach: The 10 Strongest Commanders [R18]

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minmix

Question: What is r-18 about this fanfiction? Literally, everyone who has read a Chinese fanfiction knows that they don't put spicy words. Unless the translator adds those words r-18, I don't know where they will come from.

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Chaddts

Quite the story is well written and updates regularly so far, I can't say it's "good" The entire story revolves around the Mc showing a power ranming video to everyone prevelant in bleach. From chapter 1 to chapter 50 or so where it is currently, at most an hour of time passes. In all of these chapters we merely see fights from the anime shown to the characters while they react to them. We see nothing of the mc from chapter 1 onwards. The chapters themselves are also terribly short. The format for the story should be 1 chapter per ranking. Each chapter should show the next ranking, with the end of the chapter showing the reactions. In other words the fight would be shown uninterrupted, and the fowoing by reactions after which the chapter concludes, and the next chapter starts with a new ranking and the same format as before. Currently only 5 of 15 have been ranked in nearly 50 chapter. At the current pace it'll be chapter 150 before the very first video even finishes being watched. In other words 150 chapters only covers at most a few hours of time during he story because it's constantly being drug out with useless "reaction" and "fluff"

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asdasdssf

If you want to recap some fights from original Bleach, this might be of interest. But there's literally no story here, we see mc in first chapter and after that it's just recaps of original story aka. people reacting to the rankings.

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wert_hg

So in the description it says it's Yuri, but it also says that it's a he. So what's going on? is it Yuri or not?

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xBlue_Wyvern

Do you have a name for the original Mtl? If so can you post it please?

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Tugsoo

seems interesting. but chapters are too short. you get some kind of reaction from some character in a single chapter, that is it

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famz_l

Is this fanfic really have a lemon? Because i see tag r18 in this fanfic ......................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,

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Zobemaru_II

Начало заинтриговало ... Но это просто пересказ некоторых боевых сцен манги и аниме. С дополнением в виде комментариев разных персонажей канона. Разочаровало очень сильно. Заметно, что автор совершенно не готов продвигать сюжет фанфика, а просто пишет комменты к дракам канона. Удачи

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LeBronJames23

DOG SHIT DONT READ IT!!!!The story is actually good but it's literally just bleach characters reacting to each other's feats and throwing fits when they lose this shits ass doesn't waste ur time

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Lizrock

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Your story has such a strong visual rhythm, it’s rare to find writing that translates so naturally into imagery. I could literally see the panels forming in my head as I read. I work on comic and illustration commissions for authors, and this one really struck me. Totally casual, just thought I’d mention how inspiring it was. If you’re ever curious, I’m on Discord (bennett_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse_).

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AstuteObserver777

Everything is good except for the fact that it seems like the author or translator is deliberately shortening the chapters in the later chapters.

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eternalice

Around 75 chapters in no progress is being made. The story is just moments from bleach with commentary interspersed. No setup, no rhyme, no reason. The author is obviously just here for farming viewers using Paterson or some other service. There is no genuine passion for the story or even a story.

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Chill_guy_

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