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James, a brilliant mechanical engineer and passionate history enthusiast, loses his life in a tragic house fire—only to find himself in a mysterious world as the ruler of an island nation. Armed with his modern knowledge and unwavering ambition, James embarks on a bold mission to industrialize his kingdom and build an empire on which the sun never sets.
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Sumulat ng pagtatasaFirst of all, I want to thank everyone who has supported this book. When I was writing it, I never expected it to gain so much attention. In terms of content, the book will focus on kingdom-building, warfare, and economics. If you’re looking for a more realistic kingdom-building novel in an isekai setting, this is exactly what you’re looking for. If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment.
I feel like I've discovered Arkenstone, I like it a lot, I hope it continues. When the power stone opens, I will support it immediately. I love a history novel that begins on an island or in an isolated place. I think I'm very lucky today.
𝐇𝐞𝐲 , 𝐈 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝𝐧'𝐭 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐩 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠. 𝐈𝐭'𝐬 𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐥𝐲 𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐛𝐥𝐞. 𝐘𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐰𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐨 𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐈 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐦𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐚𝐦𝐚𝐳𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧 𝐨𝐫 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜. 𝐒𝐨, 𝐈'𝐦 𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐮𝐟𝐟 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜𝐬, 𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐚, 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬. 𝐍𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐭 𝐚𝐥𝐥, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐈'𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐭 𝐢𝐭. 𝐈𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐝, 𝐡𝐢𝐭 𝐦𝐞 𝐮𝐩 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 ( 𝐔𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐞: 𝐄𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞_) 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐥𝐬. 𝐂𝐚𝐧'𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐲𝐨𝐮. 𝐁𝐞𝐬𝐭, 𝐄𝐯𝐞.
Hi author, I am a casual reader, and I recently came across your story, which I found truly impressive. I greatly admire your style of writing. May I ask how long you have been writing?
Author you abandoned the novel? the update stability explain themselves, the story development it's too much fast paced, in the beginning of the story it's said the era the protagonist is living it's medieval times but when questioned about coal or ore output you used early industrial revolution, the things the protagonist launch as a invention or a policy always goes smoothly with no difficulty in development or someone against the new law, the technological jump it's too much, brutal and unrealistic even with the protagonist knowing how to do, I'm thinking the nation that is Spain already have galleons, the nation of the protagonist doesn't even have that and jump directly to steel dreadnoughts ignoring the years of development and construction of a new type of ship with an uncommon material as steel in the era and ignores the shortage of manpower and knowledgeable people, all goes smoothly and the protagonist goes to sleep happily, his father and other lord's that are part of the government are figureheads and don't have an opinion, his mother only exist to say she's alive in the beginning and that he needs to marry. that's all folks
Progress is far too quick and inconsistent. Also, it's very clear the author isn't familiar with anything engineering related considering the quantities of products and time-frames of construction.
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I bought all the current chapters to see if it was worth reading further and sadly it isnt to be. The novels synopsis is good and I have always enjoyed a good kingdom building themed story. Yet this one is dry, empty and just very bland. The progress of development is interesting but it jumps to fast around in its progress and misses some obvious points of technology that could have been developed. I could not find anything of merit, or to relate to with this MC just every chapter would appear as he wakes, decides to exercise, visit his old man with some ground breaking theory or invention, visits some industries and then goes home to develop further ground breaking developments then goes to bed. It just really didn’t inspire enthusiasm within me. Perhaps if the author introduced some tragedy, some form of perhaps romance etc may have given it some missing factors to develop further but even the war scenes were just robotic in delivery. Not to say, they sounded robotic, just very much a shopping list on how to do things. Overall, it has a good idea and a lot of potential, it is just the delivery was uninspiring and simply fell flat for me. Tl;dr - it has potential but it is up to the reader to determine this.
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Been looking for something like this for a while and am glad to have found this, please keep up the good work because so far i'm really enjoying it!
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Do not come into this story expecting it be realistic as the author claims. Time has no meaning in this story. Within a single year the mc has managed to bring about the Industrial Revolution. Even with memories from his past life, this is impossible. It would take a decade at least. However, within a single year the mc has introduced, steam engines, trains, bank, stocks and stock market, late 19th/early 20th century firearms and artillery and machine guns, steel ships. All of these things have been not just introduced but refined and perfected within a single year. Just getting the steam engine built properly and his factories installed with them should have taken a year to accomplish. This is a story where you turn off your brain while reading. Do not expect any kind of realistic kingdom building. There are alt history novels on this sight that are far more realistic. However, this story is still slightly enjoyable. Not much is known about the world, and the characters don’t really have any unique personalities, but it’s still early on. My biggest advice to the author: remove your own review where you say this story is a more realistic kingdom builder then other stories on this site. It most definitely is not. Good luck with your novel.