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Julius Braveheart is a hardworking, geeky Scotsman from the Warhammer 40,000 universe. He finds himself accidentally teleported to this universe during the Great Crusade of the Emperor of Mankind. Watch him grow and gain power with the System, which allows him to buy and summon elements or people from sci-fi universes (Halo, Star Wars, StarCraft, etc.).
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๐๐๐ฒ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ฉ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐ญ'๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ซ๐๐๐ข๐๐ฅ๐. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐. ๐๐จ, ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฎ, ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ต๐๐ฎ, ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ช๐ฒ๐ฏ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ป๐. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐'๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐บ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ๐ธ๐ป๐ฌ๐๐) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ. ๐๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐ ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ.
Let's go over a few things First if you can shut off your brain you'll likely enjoy this my biggest issue is the sheer inconsistency as if two different people are trying to write a similar book but Don't know what the other just did one Chapter MC Needs to pay energy for each shot of his energy gun (35 while getting 5 (small Prey 15 Humanoid prey) back for kills the very next chapter he's firing for free then 2 more and it's costing again One Moment Marietls are Optional for Enhancement the next Their very much required along with energy It's a Absolute Mess of Logistics as for plot I read like 5 chapters it's roughly been Kill xenos
so far pretty good but a lot of stuff is under used like the Starcraft technology tree why is he not made a single Thor and technically this is all technology is not like pure gameplay he could make a Odin only one mention of marauders being a thing and the only ground vehicle mentioned is the Goliath
Hey, author continue with this novel I love it. I can't wait for him to meet the emperor so please do not drop this fic๐๐