Legendary Broken Player - VRMMORPG

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Galanteo

Hi... Readers... What's in store for you in this story? Please take a moment to read my summary. [img=Mad] 1. It's a VR game where the MC lives two lives: one in the game and one in real life. But mostly, he will dive into the game. [img=recommend] 2. Blacksmith? Kingdom Building? YES, YES, YES. The MC will spend a lot of time crafting items, building his own city... and eventually, building his Kingdom! [img=gift] 3. Wives? Yes! The MC will marry (Is this a spoiler?) The game world runs three times faster than real life, so he will spend years inside the game. [img=Shocked] 4. Romance? Yes! Harem? Uhm... Yes? Yes! [img=Loving it] 5. Action? Yes, but this novel will focus more on character relationships, friendships, romance, and life inside the game, which is not always about fighting monsters. But don't worry, there will be big battles, from one-on-one duels and party raids to massive wars! [img=gift] 6. The plot is very thick! I've made extensive Google Sheets to document everything. But don't fret, all details will be revealed gradually as the story progresses. [img=golden ticket] 7. Characters? They are alive, with their own personalities and emotions. They aren't just random figures thrown into the story. You'll definitely feel connected to them as you delve deeper into the narrative. [img=recommend] 8. One thing I pride myself on is CONSISTENCY. In the status, skill names, character names and backgrounds, equipment details, and items owned by the MC. Challenge the stat points and numbers shown in each chapter. I'm meticulous with my notes! [img=proud] 9. For those who love detailed novels in the gaming genre, I hope you'll find satisfaction in reading this story. Everything is presented in a structured and well-organized manner. [img=exp] 10. Ask me more. [img=recommend]

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PRAW_NC

This story is simply a children's tale about friendship, with a childlike drama that seems completely silly to an adult. Therefore, if you are over 18, I am not sure you will find it interesting to read. The story is suitable for its target audience, but others may want to pass on it.

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Daken_4

Ive been reading this and have enjoyed it quite a lot but one thing I don't like is how everyone outside of the MC's friend group are such terrible people for no reason whatsoever and it gets annoying with how often it appears.

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David_Powers

I'm at ch. 35 and while initially it was good it's quickly becoming dull. Nothing has happened and he hasn't leveled up once or really accomplished anything. Nothing of interest has happened or even seems to be happening time soon. Da fks the point of a passive leveling system if it's that slow.

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Dochermit

9 out of 10 chapters are filler chapters a lot of which wind up going to people who you will either never see again in the story or you will see every 100 episodes or so it's actually got a good storyline for the 10% of the time it's actually doing it but the overabundance of filler episodes ruins the story one star dumbs down

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Twisted_Lives

I like the original version of the novel as well. I like the changes made to this version that adds additional information and events that make it better. I like the fact that the novel focuses on both aspects of the main characters life ( the game and real world ). It makes reading this novel more realistic and enjoyable.

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Lasserine

it reads close like how overgeared is. story isn't bad

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Lewis_Cooper_9575

this definitely became one of my favorite novels almost immediately. It has excellent pacing and the world building is definitely top notch. broken definitely deserves his name as a broken character OP and yet not at the same time a perfect blend

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153fairygirl

i hope you can continue to write the nove but i understand if this is the end cus it's interesting

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Fenrir2883

Amazing novel, I love it, I hope you can continue it at some point.

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Sezane

although it is a decent series, similar to Overgeared, it has extremely inconsistent style and mc. The mc can say that he wants 3 wives firmly and 3 chapters later act as a typical virgin protagonist. At the beginning of the play he seems relatively cold and attentive, with a high "mental" level, but for some reason as the play goes on this changes and he becomes more and more generic and arrogant. The writing is strange to read, sometimes it feels like a strange slice of life and other times like a series with an important political subplot. So strange that you can read how he is passing the princess test, so that in the next chapter some blacksmiths steal him, so that in the next one out of nowhere he will have a basketball game (which lasts 3 fucking chapters) and then 2 flashback chapters to finally return to the main plot. Another quite annoying detail is how "mean" the world is, basically the entire story revolves around how the protagonist shows off in front of people who treat him badly (and this literally happens every 2 chapters) and will feel overwhelmingly in the comments of these people, this may be logical perhaps at the beginning but it becomes extremely repetitive when, having the social position he has at the end of volume 2, this continues to happen constantly for whatever reason. Although I only spoke badly about this work in the review, it is not a bad series if you can ignore putting up with such a fragmented world. For my part, after reading about 2 volumes I realized that the author does not respect his own work and only deals with cliches and repetitive situations, so I left it.

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Jeffrey_Dodson

i love this story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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XArezzX

The novel is pretty decent, heavily influenced by "Overgeared", no conplains there, but, DUDE! Can You stop with the innecesary laughter every sentence!? I'm at 300+ ch and seriously the "hahaha" "khikhikhi' from about 80% of the characters is hella anoying AF! that makes them look the same, no variation on personality, they look dumb honestly. It remains me of the constant spam of *rumble* *aaaah* on "Infinite Mana" lmao (I dropped that because couldnt take it anymore)

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Tyson_1102

I think this story is pretty solid and a very chill read. It's pretty much exactly as the synopsis says, an OP MC going from nothing to a broken player. The only caveat I have so far thats becoming rapidly more annoying is the HEAVY lean on constanting using the 'misunderstanding' cliche. The first couple I ignored but im starting to just roll my eyes now whenever it happens now and sadly, it drives all of the primary "conflict" atm. Still worth the read but im hoping this annoying stuff gets cleared up soon.

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Corey_Evans_0719

Can definitely see some influence from overgeared but it also is very much its own story. Only 200 chapters in so far but thoroughly enjoying the adventure! Looking forward to how you expand the world more.

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Gary_Graves

Just wanted to say it's been a while since a story has really gotten me hooked. Loving LBP so far, and I'm hoping to see how far it goes.

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Dream_Mask

Goddess of luck + unrivalled determination = Op mc. keep the good work.[img=strong]

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Andthomas4

I've read hundreds of books and this story is definitely up there on my list of favorites. I love how the story flows between the game world and the real world. The system and skills are all extremely thought out and detailed.