/ Fantasy / Reborn as the Genius Son of the Richest Family
3.94 (144 mga marka)
Buod
After 600+ chapters, here’s what to expect.
First of all, throughout this novel, I have learned and improved in my story-making ability. Sadly though, you could only see this improvement about several hundred chapters in, like in the upper 300s and early 400s. And this change comes before a story arc that is bad compared to my recent story arcs. You may feel inclined to stop before then.
You may feel inclined to stop even before you reach a hundred chapters. You may think, “Oh, there’s no action, it’s boring, and everything is easy for our MC.”
But if you persist, you will see the true vision I have for the novel. Kingdom building, action-packed, and enough slice-of-life to warm your hearts into overdrive.
If you hear the words, DIVA, AUBILITIES, and METROPOLIS, then you are about to enter, what I think, is my best major story arcs I have written so far. The Metropolis Arc is peak.
Here’s what to expect:
— Action: Yes. There’s a new and exciting change in the latter chapters that allowed for a lot of action.
— Kingdom Building: Absolutely. I’ll admit that in the earlier chaps, there’s a lot of need for improvement. But I think that I was able to remedy most of them in the recent chaps.
— Slice-of-life: Yes, sir. If you loved the novel for its slice-of-life, then you can rest assured that it would continue on even in the most latest chapters.
— Romance: This one, I’ll admit, needs a lot of improvement. But it’s because they are still kids in the novel so I still stray away from something truly romantic. However, romance in this novel could be attributed to the romance of family and of friendships for now.
I hope that I was able to convince you to start reading my novel. If you read it before and want to start reading again, you can message me on Discord for questions regarding plot points, characters, or anything you forgot and I can remind you.
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Michael was suddenly reborn into a another world by a God because of an accidental death. To make up for this fact, the God gave him another life in a fantasy world of swords, magic, and monsters.
Unfortunately, it turned out that the world he was reborn into was still stuck in the medieval times. It didn't have electricity, it didn't have proper plumbing, and it didn't have any technology that he was so used to back in his old world.
But thanks to the God's blessing and an AI assistant called ChatJK1, he was given the power to MAKE his life comfortable. Slowly, Michael transforms this new world into a place even better than his previous one by taking ideas from the modern world and putting it in this world, with the added bonus of magic.
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Sumulat ng pagtatasaI have nothing else to say, I enjoyed reading the available chapters. It is well written and the pacing is good. I enjoy it.
I rarely write reviews but this whole story was a massive disappointment. Going into this I thought it would be really good due to the amount of 5 star reviews and the concept of the novel however I was quickly disappointed. There a three main issues that I have with this novel 1. The author has a weird grasp of economics, the way the currency was setup up had problems from the beginning however these could be overlooked until the author decided to start adding USD conversion at which point everything went downhill. For perspective the author claims that maids in the MCs family get paid a relatively high wage of 1 gold a month. However the author later says that 1,000 gold = $10,000 (1 gold = $10) meaning that the maids make less than 1/560 of the average monthly salary in the US. This could maybe make sense if the MC was in a third world country where labor costs were low however the MC is the son of the richest family in the world and obviously does not live in a poor area. I got past this point however and kept reading, however shortly after when the MC introduces chess it is priced at 100 bronze per set which would be $0.001 per set. You can buy ramen in most gas stations for $1 meaning 1 ramen noodles container = 1,000 chess sets. Make it make sense. Again this would maybe be fine if the author didn’t bring up the amount the MC made in USD repeatedly. 2. The MC tries to implement modern social practices that do not make sense in a medieval setting onto this world (e.g. The MC tries to force all the house staff to work a maximum of 8 hours per day and no more, great thought except it makes no sense in a medieval society where work hours are determined by sunrise and sunset) 3. Cringe / Cliche. Everything seems to always work out perfectly for the MC with little to no effort, MC follows reincarnator 101 on steroid template to make money using modern ideas but has an AI that does all the work and creates perfect blueprints. What really irked me though was the MC just straight up giving away the soap recipe to other people because he didn’t want to hurt their business and wanted everyone to live peacefully and happily. Verdict: Had and has potential, author should rewrite what they have an try again. Would not recommend reading until the author makes some edits and fixes some of the biggest issues specifically the currency.
Beware, its a communist trap that tries to spread communist ideals, free stuff for everyone, eyc. Read only if it's your cup of tea.
Mc literally gave the formula for item cuz he didn't wanted enemy his reason?? they wont be able to feed their family if he took over the bussiness SHITTT novel
This had some potential but author screwed it up with a completely nonsensical magic system and world building that suffered because of it.
DO NOT READ!!!! You will only be pissed because there not many chapters available 😠😠😠😠 Author is a Slacker. There should be Hundreds of Chapters but only 50??? TThats just laziness. 😠
story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly. why im dropping. 1st his fiance is also a reincarnated. 2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability. 3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year. 4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh. 5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.
Ipakita ang SpoilerToo many Unecessary Clichés and Tropes used here, so yeah, not worth reading much. Had a lot of hope for this but the author did well destroying that in the first 20 Chapters.
Important Note Before You Start Reading! If you've ever read those Chinese novels where the protagonist is the "chosen one" and the entire world revolves around him—where even the most brilliant villain turns into a complete idiot when they meet the MC—then you're probably familiar with the trope. Well, this novel follows that same pattern, but with a twist: the world is, for some reason, completely brain-dead. The characters have access to magic, yet they only use the most basic spells and completely ignore the practical applications of their abilities. This is where the MC comes in. He introduces modern technology (basically, cheap ChatGPT helped) to bring everyday appliances into the world. In one chapter, he invents electricity, and the next day, he’s making air conditioners. The narrative skips over crucial inventions like transistors or semiconductors, which would have been more foundational. To top it off, the MC comes from the richest family and has the unique ability to wield all the elements—something that nobody in the world can do. But despite this, it doesn’t seem to matter at all. He has a supreme skill that less than 10 people in the entire world possess, but nobody seems to care. No one treats him like a celebrity or even a target of interest. The fact that he’s essentially a walking powerhouse is completely ignored, which just feels bizarre. No Reaction from World or No Information Spread.
It is very well written and there are good updates. It is very well made and is a very good plot and story line. Later I think this novel would make a very good manga or manhwa. Since it is very detailed and has a steady story development.
Sorry author-sama I'm dropping this novel. I read up til chp 123 I believe, titled Red Dress. The concept of the story was what got me into reading it, but when he turns 10 it starts getting fast paced. After discovering the oil in the parched lands it was nothing but invention after inventions popping up real fast, wasn't even stretched out but more skimmed over, not what I wanted to read in a worldbuilding novel. Now its to the point in the story we see the female lead when he's 11 years old, and she's 10 (as I'm writing this, they have yet to meet). She's quite basically the same as him just not in the magical class but the warrior class. Which is ok for most stories but in this one it just feels forced, it doesn't seem natural (she's his arranged fiance by both parents). For me this was the last flag. Hope people still read this though these are just my preference and opions. The writing quality is good. Storytelling in the beginning is good; now not so much. Character description is good. World building is there.... Overall the concept is good but, unfortunately for me it just hit and missed the mark.
Ipakita ang SpoilerI dont know if its slow or fast progression in regards with the story but i wish theres a sense of conflict, tragedy. RIGHT! the author just taking a sweet time 150+ chaps for 2mos after release? Lol.
Lets get to the point, i've read up to 101 chapters and this is my opinion about this novel. GOOD : -Mc is blessed, strong ,and talented in magic & crafting. -I like the the modern technology that he introduce to this magical world. -Kingdom building. BAD : -Everything is too smooth for mc, it feels unreal. -Not a single villain appear, all characters have a good personality. -The only thing he fight is a river slime, what is all that power for -_- -Mc's citizen can get anything they want for free. The conclusion is, if you want to read a story of weak-to-strong mc that fight stronger enemies as he progressed, this isn't for you. if you want to read a story of crafting, and introducing modern world technology to magical world daily life, then this is for you. as for the kingdom building is below average imo, mc not even thinking of recruiting talented soldier and building strong army for his Nation. all he care is people with production talents. and it feels unreal that everyone let mc "do whatever he want comfortably" without anything bothering him.
Ipakita ang Spoilerwould have loved to rate this higher, got to about chap 120. It is truly mid, seems just like the writer is just either having fun playing to overdone tropes, or worse yet just an AI.
well even if everything is okey but the point is this story feels hollow cause our mc just lacks motivation or doesn't have good motivation for story to progress. he just want to watch anime and that is his overall motivation. mc action is compeltly driven by other people choice and story instead of other way around. for example mc won't do anything unless some forced plot is upon him. he just want to maintain status quo and story is compeletly driven by author putting problem in his way.
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Author here! If you like Tensura (tensei slime datta ken), then you will absolutely love this novel. The MC uses inventions and ideas from the modern world, and uses it to create his own nation that leads a technological revolution in the world. Of course, since this is a world of magic, the MC figures out a way to combine both technology and magic into something completely different as well. As for action, there will be some eventually. Since the MC creates a nation, he will also build his own army to ward off kingdoms and nations that arent exactly okay with how fast the territory progresses. As for romance, there will be some eventually. Since the MC starts as a baby, he’ll have to grow up more before that starts to happen. The MC will be surrounded by women, but it won’t be a harem. If you like the novel, then please read, vote, comment, and review about what you like, what you don’t like, and what you want to see in the future. Happy reading! 😁📖