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He was once a top-tier cultivator destined for the Golden Immortal Realm.
One fatal mistake ended his life and reincarnated him as a System—a mysterious entity that guides cultivators.
But betrayal and the Anti-System Alliance dragged him from B-rank glory to F-rank obscurity, stranded in Grave Omega, a dead star system where cultivators are abandoned to rot.
After five failed hosts, he bonds with Shen Yuan, a Nascent Soul cultivator on the edge of death.
Can an untested host and a broken System climb their way back to power?
Or will Shen Yuan become fuel like all the others?
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