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4.6 (55 mga marka)
Buod
After her death, a young woman is reborn in the world of Young Justice.
But wait…why am I in jail?! Why am I Gwen Stacy, and what the hell is a Street level system?!
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Additional Tags - Harem, Yuri, Lesbian, Decent Harem, GxG, Young Justice, Love, Action, Romance, Multiverse, System, Smut, Lemons, R18, Cartoons, Anime, Live Action.
Current World - Young Justice
Confirmed Love Interests - Artemis Crock, Miss Martian/M’gann M’orzz, Raven.
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4.6
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Sumulat ng pagtatasaCame back after a long time to see if anything changed and... no, The author still insists on making the Mc always right, changes or exaggerates the personalities of other characters to make them seem worse. Overall everything gives off an... immature vibe, The author is probably young so I get it but still more than 100 chapters and no improvement.
I love the story, but why did you have to stop two good fanfics and then just start another novel, like Unique Gamers Travels? Now, it takes longer for a new chapter to be added lately. Travels of the Daughter of God was enjoyable; it was more enjoyable than Unique Gamers Travels.
Ipakita ang SpoilerVery well written, especially for a power fantasy. Definitely worth reading, but I'm hesitant to give this a higher rating for a few reasons. The girlfriends that Gwen gets are largely inconsequential, to the point they might as well not even be there. The system is extremely clunky, and while there is eventually a story explanation for that, it sometimes makes it extremely difficult to read. Finally, the cognitive dissonance of Gwen one-shotting pretty much everything she fights, yet still complaining that she's bored and wants a challenge, all while being unwilling to enter a fight with anything on her level. Definitely one of the better fanfics on WN, despite those hangups, so worth the read.
It is an exciting fanfic. Since the setting is the comics world of DC/Marvel Universe, all the characters/references mentioned are easily understood if you have ever read or watched Marvel/DC. Even if you haven't read/watch Marvel/DC, you get a good understanding of the powers granted to the MC. Or else you can do a Google Search and you immediately can picture the hero/villain with a wiki page of their powers. Nice. The system barely makes a showing here except to show stats and granted rewards. this isn't one of those "symbiotic" systems. it feels more like the AI of a game, or a good secretary/butler. Which is good since the focus is now literally on Gwen's development. However, the story seems to develop too fast. I feel she is really reeeeaaaallly OP. By the 15th chapter, she is basically immortal. Not an Undying, but an Immortal. I mean, she literally receives the knowledge and powers of superheroes/supervillains every few chapters, by the handful. One of them had the ability to survive without breathing, and a few had the ability for rapid regeneration/healing. She is developing too fast.
I loved this story and its main character. The plot is captivating and the character development is exceptional. I'm looking forward to more. I hope the author continues to publish!
pretty good I like the pacing of the story so far can't wait for the 5th chapter onward to see how it develops from here 😀
I was having fun reading this till the author decided to add cultivation which is admittedly a pet peeve. Honestly it's good enough that I'm just gonna put it on my on hold list for when I'm bored out of my mid with nothing good coming out. Overall worth a read.
My friend, I loved your fanfic so far, I loved everything, congratulations and the 3rd time that I'm rereading it since the last update of the new chapter, I honestly just hope that you abandon this raw pearl that you have in your hands, and I say again to goods for fic.
ch 17. so far really good for a YURI. Not a fan how the whole universe is AU just so that Author can up the age of 1 character by 2 years, it's clearly done so that when they get together with MC they are 18 instead of younger. Funny how the whole universe in the story needs to become AU just for this.
Tbh I clicked on this as I like the character and idea, especially because it’s yuri. Main issue is that it’s just not my cup of tea as it’s a heavy system fic with massive progression. It’s not bad, and a lot of people will enjoy it, but I feel like it progresses way too quickly. The mc is getting really OP powers like no tomorrow, where instead there should be some chapters of her just building her current powers. The system is called street level system, but a lot of the people are super OP in their own rights. It’s good just too fast and OP for me.
Top tier good stuff, got no compaints. Fun, fast-paced, good character, not too serious… good stuff.
The integration of the Street Level System into the Young Justice lore is seamless and intriguing. Overall, "SpiderGwen: I Have a System?!" is a must-read for fans of reincarnation and superhero genres, promising an exhilarating ride that you won’t want to miss.
I enjoyed reading your three stories they are unique and quite interesting I hope you continue all three of them
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Well, this is aight. The powers and the concept/system are interesting, but that’s about it. Everything related to romance (which is a big part of the novel) is so badly done, from dialogue to the way they interact, to the forced and unatural details and actions that push their relationships, you should stick to just one romantic interest, like in “Daughter of God” which is one of my fav novels on this site. There is also the issue that the mc feels like a man, more than in other yuri novels. The mc also does not act properly, given all the knowledge and info she has. This can be fixed by adding some monologues or plans that highlight her intelligence, or show the steps in creating tech, etc. The powerscalling of characters also feels confusing. Well, it’s still enjoyable but not anything special.