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WillMissQ
male LV 14I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
2017-10-27 Sumali United States
Three years of bathing in a yellow sun’s light would give him over 10,950 stats in each category other than mental because that grows out a much slower rate.
In addition, with three years of secret development, he believed that his strength would be terrifying by then.
Kryptonian God Among Supernaturals
Anime & Comics · Vanguard_V
The prince's wife, a woman called Meghan, would be judging the Miss America pageant next month. Whoever won the state competition would represent California in the nationwide pageant, and it was strange for a judge to be present for the local competition.
Waking up in a TV Show
TV · geoff_dads
She’s already asked this and he’s already explained it but go on. You need to add a little bit of extra backstory to make him appear more depressing
"Is this Watcher that bad?" Thalia asked, noticing Godwyn and Mimir's unpleasant expressions when mentioning the Watcher of Asgard.
Percy Jackson - Godwyn the Golden
Book&Literature · TheGreatPrince
All I could think to myself was this moment from the boys
"And you want a speech?! You want me to live your own lives? What are you? Fucking children?!"
The Elven Evolution: Starting With 1 Million SSSR Skills
Fantasy · CocoyamWarrior
And yet somehow he’s going to be able to last the whole fight smh. There’s already inconsistencies.
The skill drained far too much mana, so he had to be careful when using it or else he would run out of mana before the fight was even halfway through.
The Elven Evolution: Starting With 1 Million SSSR Skills
Fantasy · CocoyamWarrior
Let the literal goddess fix it smh
Eliron slowly shook his head. There was no question about it, he had to take down this man right now, or there was no telling what would become of the wood elves.
The Elven Evolution: Starting With 1 Million SSSR Skills
Fantasy · CocoyamWarrior
So the sword can transform into a dagger? Please get your shit together.
Ang talatang ito ay tinanggal na.
The Elven Evolution: Starting With 1 Million SSSR Skills
Fantasy · CocoyamWarrior
Let me guess, he’s gonna bulk up and get a swimmers build like every single other story out there smh. Give me something new like someone built like Arnold Schwarzenegger. Give me someone built like a Greek god and not the stereotypical: “lean, but still explosive muscles.”
'Why are my arms so girly?!'
The Elven Evolution: Starting With 1 Million SSSR Skills
Fantasy · CocoyamWarrior
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original I Can Be A Hero?
3.2
Jake Griffs was a normal guy. He just finished high school, has no girlfriend, and is just starting college. He thought that his life was going to be typical and average but that all changed when the rules changed. One day, he was reading an old Superman comic on his laptop when giant meteors start to fall all over the planet and one crashes into his dorm building. The concussive blast knocks him out and when he wakes up later, in the hospital, he hears a voice telling him, "Superman System activated." ~~~~~~~ Literally a brand new author, I am writing this just because I'm bored. Enjoy. This will go where the readers take it. I will create a discord and we can talk about some characters and I will be taking advice on my mistakes. And English is my only language (no need to worry about shit grammar). Thank you. I don't own the above image. I just thought it was cool. Never will go premium and don't accept patreons. Just enjoy the novel. Let system-chan make your day. Discord: https://discord.gg/yBxcpX530 Chs 1.4k Mga Koleksyon
- original
What is this Superman System?
This is my reboot. Gonna work on the synopsis later. I suck at them lmao.3 Chs 258 Mga Koleksyon
This chapter was pitifully short. He met his parents and they gave him a scroll. That’s all that happened.
Kryptonian God Among Supernaturals
Anime & Comics · Vanguard_V