DarkWizardZeref

The system is awful. The spelling is bad. How hard is it to read the chapter before you post. It looks like a child wrote this, but I guess it is better than AI

Well written are you drunk?

Not my kinda fiction to many different POV but it is well written and seems to be flowing good. I won’t be reading anymore because I myself do not like a bunch of POV changes ever chapter. Breaks the immersion for me. Anyone else give it a try you may like it.

Nothing has changed from cannon. And they forgot there sister. Honestly nothing to hate nothing to praise.

To much Ai. The mc is just scared of everyone knowing his secret. Like if you have powers to see where someone coming at you a few seconds into the the future no one would think that. They would think you have skills and training. Also I don’t know if it is ai but your making everyone like a robotic they are all smart and intelligent. They all have a lot of smart things to say. It reeks of ai

Quick review. The ai on this is bad. A lot of the writing is bad and it does not make sense. There is no background for the characters. I don’t know if that is to make him more edgy. But honestly it just makes it boring. Like the character all feel fake. Honestly not worth it

Just watch the tv show. Nothing changes. And the rob keeps popping up as an excuse not to change the plot. Nothing has changed really from the start. Even he could not get to the radio first because of plot.

Female lead character.

Good story good price too. Consider this me saying I am sorry. I honestly know idea apple did that. That is insane. Sorry I was wrong. Good story keep up the good work