BwipoQwipo

BwipoQwipo

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BwipoQwipo
26 days ago
Commented

I have a hypothesis. im not sure how close to history this will follow, obviously things have already changed but I shall leave this here in case im right. I cant remember if the mc's dad was mentioned at the start,anyways I have a feeling the mc is a price of Qin. it was stated before and hinted the the Emperor's past relationship was broken up due to political stuff, what if the mc's mom was that woman? That would explain her knowledge of how to read and her medical experience. What if she was kicked out for some reason and was pregnant but no one knew. thats why when the mc's hometown was first mentioned to the emperor he was shocked but when they mentioned she had 2 kids he didnt think much of it and brushed it off. anyways this is just my guess 🤷

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1 months ago
Replied to BwipoQwipo

Update. I still like the novel, but be cautious. At the start and into the early middle, the chapters were long and fulfilling. even if it took multiole chapters to cover 1 or a few scenes, it was kept interesting and detailed. but from the mid to the chapters just released, it has turned into a money grab. you can obviously tell that they cut a single chapter into multiple ones. some chapters are just conversations that carry on into the next. Another thing is repeated information to fill the word count. The same infirmation is brought up in multiple chapters, just rephrased and with different characters. Instead of cutting it short or giving a brief description, they will literally have the same conversation just worded differently than the characters before. So unless you're prepared to spend a lot of coins, I would suggest just skipping this one.

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BwipoQwipo
1 months ago
Commented

again, I like this novel, but cmon. I guess the dialogue is interesting, sort of, but we know all the infirmation that was in this chapter already...well except the ending. but this chaoter could have just been added to another one. It covers nothing new, just a repeat of information like always. Honestly, I dont think I'll be spending any more coins on this, or at least no the privilege. I'd rather use fast passes. Its obvious that they are cutting 1 chapter into multiple parts to make more money, and honestly, I'd rather read this somewhere else than on webnovel if its going to be like that.

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BwipoQwipo
1 months ago
Commented

Dont get me wrong, Im loving this so far, but i wish it was like the beginning. at the start and towards the middle of the novel, the chapters were long, but now they seem to have cut 1 chapter into multiple parts, probably to make more money off of chapter unlocks . Also, I know it's probably for the word count and this is what annoys me too since like I said the chapters used to be long so I guess it didnt matter much then but now its kind of lame, but they seem to spend a lot of time each chapter going over what happened the previous chapter. theirs so much dialogue that isn't needed that explains what just happened, that could be used to actually make each chapter worthwhile. Since the start of this war, at least a few paragraphs, each chapter has described the Wei general being cautionary or like the other general from Zhao, like we get it, stop filling up the word count with information you've already given us. the same thing with describing how Wei's nation fate is counting on this war. Anytime the pov cut to the general from wei, he always brought it up or how he wished the mc was on his side, or those Wei wu troops or whatever being the best.

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BwipoQwipo
1 months ago
Posted

Honestly, I have enjoyed this so far. The translation is good, and I haven't noticed any major issues or even small ones like the normal she/he mistranslations. I will say the transition from wanting to live low-key and return home to being high-key and gaining strength is pretty fast. The only reason that this wasn't an issue for me is because it happened early on, and the reason was exceptable to me. The Mc's system allows him to collect attributes from corpses, and this is a minor spoiler, I guess, but also from killing enemies (he gets way more when he kills). i would rather him switch from passive to aggressive, especially since it helps him more, which he does, but some people complain the switch happens to fast but I prefer that than waiting forever for him to make proper use of his system. Overall, I think it's a good read. The story is good, too, and is one of the few novels I've been waiting for an update from.

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BwipoQwipo
2 months ago
Replied to JesusXChrist

hmm, maybe? I can see how this guy can be more useful early on. sure, having an S-Rank warrior could be good, but i see that as more of a mid to late game thing. it depends on how this world works with preventing higher lords for attacking lower ones. i would think resources management is important early on, especially with developing the land correctly. It could go both ways tbh.

"So, a newly awakened Lord, is it? Fascinating. I must say, summoning me is likely the best stroke of fortune you've had so far. I am an Efficient Tactician, skilled in Resource Allocation, Logistic Mastery, Merchant Strategy... and other useful things."

Floating Islands: SSS Gacha Lord

Floating Islands: SSS Gacha Lord

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BwipoQwipo
2 months ago
Commented

missing the Dragon Arts from the previous chapter.

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BwipoQwipo
2 months ago
Commented

Ngl Kinda confused. Did he or did he not steal his son's cultivation. Also, the ending makes it seem like they knew that Airship was coming. How? also, are the Cultivators in this shi that weak??? it never said the mc had any cultivation, and he wasn't in good condition either way, and the girl is a level below the guards,but they are able to beat them? This just feels like a major plot hole and super forced. And im not only talking about right only now, but the other guards they took out along the way should have some cultivation.

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    The Rise Of Solaris

    Sci-fi ACTION ROMANCE OVERPOWERED LEVELUP ACADEMY ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY

    The Year 2600 brought forth a cataclysmic event, as extraterrestrial forces breached our atmosphere, leaving devastation in their wake. Yet Amid the chaos the infusion of Cosmic energy triggered unprecedented cellular changes in humanity. As cities crumbled, individuals harnessed newfound abilities, transforming their very bodies into metallic like suits and unlocking powers previously unimaginable to the beings of Krylos. 400 Years later Humanity has carved out a place in space. . . . . The era of war and Expansion offers great possibilities as well as uncertainties, where power bestowed upon families can be fleeting. In this volatile environment, maintaining authority demands constant vigilance and adaptability. It is here that Elijah Comes face to face with a daunting challenge, assuming military responsibility in his family’s absence. As the 2nd son of a viscount lord, his duty becomes crucial in safeguarding their legacy within the human galactic kingdom. ------------ Author's Note: This is my first time attempting to write a novel so there are most likely going to be a lot of mistakes. I have no knowledge in writing so read at your own risk. I don't have a planned Schedule for releases. Just writing for fun but feedback would be nice. Warning: As this novel does have the Overpowered tag, I do plan to give my Mc the means to become overpowered. Don't complain about how lucky he is. That being said, I plan to even it out and hopefully not just hand him things. (I will give him the tools to become strong but he will have to gather the materials himself ;D)

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