But your combat awareness? It's a little sloppy and you focus way too much on what's directly in front of you instead of controlling the entire battlefield.
I like the dialog. If you're interested in feedback, I think a visible mark for time skips will help, and using - for speech isn't the best choice IMO, but you're doing really well with the character personalities.
Ryu lives with his father, Haru, in a small village in the land of water where he helps his father with their blacksmithing business. However, the father and son pair are not as they seem.
When Shinobi appear on their doorsteps looking to kill them, Ryu is forced to venture into the harsh world of Shinobi with only the Transformation Jutsu that his father taught him for blacksmithing. Watch Ryu as he hones his skill and becomes a legend the likes of which have never been seen in the multiverse. (By the way, the tag says OP for a reason, Ryu will end up so broken. Like OAA level. And there won't be any cheats, Ryu will discover the multiverse and explore it all with his own power. If you're wondering how such heresy is possible, especially in a Naruto fic, go read the fanfic. Honestly, I made it my personal mission to torment all the power scalers that will read this.)
I don't own the image, I can barely write my name in an understandable way much less draw something like that, so if the original artist (TorinoGT from what I found on Wallpaper Abyss) wants it taken down message me.
I also don't own Naruto, but I think that's obvious. I mean, if I did own it, I sure as hell wouldn't write fanfictions about it... I'd also be rich :-(
One last thing, as of writing this, I'm on what's called in my country "Year of Service" where we go volunteer for a year around the country before going to the military. The workdays are 13~ hours and I live with like 7 other people in a tiny apartment so that's fun. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that my upload schedule will be awful and one chapter a week will be lucky, so be warned.
This is an AU and it will take quite some time before we will reach the cannon story
When quirks first emerged out of nowhere the world was thrown into chaos. Countless wars broke out, whether it was between countries looking to find and control powerful quirk users, or civil wars as a result of people suddenly having a massive amount of power over others.
As the generations passed, most countries achieved a somewhat peaceful state. But not all did. Follow David, a young boy who was called to an adventure in a godforsaken land.
Obviously, I don't own anything related so MHA and I also don't own the cover image. I tried to find the artist to give credit but I couldn't. However, if the original artist wants me to take it down please message me.
It's the final battle at Raftel, Luffy and his pirate crew vs the marines. The battle is going back and forth with many casualties from both sides and at the last moment of the battle, Trafalgar Law dies.
Law is determined to make one last move to help Luffy win, so just before his death, he uses his fruits' special ability and sacrifices himself to give Luffy immortality.
One thousand years later Luffy manages to find a way to return back in time, so he could help his friends and family make their dreams come true since he already achieved his, and was eaten by the guilt of being the only one that did so.
Join Luffy in his journey to help those who helped him, and have a little fun along the way
"Good." She dropped him one last time, scowling. "Don't fuck with my shipping."
Monster? No, I'm a Cultivator! (Percy Jackson)
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