Deus_Maligno

I think it's a good novel, but the author creates some nonsensical dialogues between Ling Yun's wives. I'm on chapter 1162, and the wives' discussion revolves around how to kill him if he succumbs to his demonic side. Being wives and supposedly in love with him, they shouldn't prioritize the lives of other creatures over their husband/master's. Ling Xi herself says she doesn't care about other lives, but she's thinking about killing the protagonist; this dialogue makes no sense. If Ling Yun becomes a demon, what's the problem? These wives are far too weak compared to wives in other cultivation novels who would support their husbands and disregard everyone else.

Adding another universe and some kind of Paragon concept when the protagonist hasn't even ascended to a higher world yet doesn't seem like a good idea; it's all getting confusing. To begin with, this Paragon thing wasn't even properly explained, and the main character was thrown into another universe to fight without any explanation whatsoever.

Coming back here to criticize why the protagonist doesn't use his half-dragon form even in fights at a disadvantage, when he fought against the evil BAT and the protector of the kingdom he would be less ugly if he was using the half-dragon form, he was in a coma for years after fighting the EVIL BAT but didn't use the half-dragon form

I still don't understand this thing about true names, is Lillian the reincarnation of that dragon that died in the primordial era or did she just inherit her legacy?

the second criticism: the author keeps giving spoilers about the future at the end of several chapters, nobody likes spoilers, especially coming from the author himself

nothing out of the standard of what is expected of an H-novel, I only have one criticism to make for the author, THERE IS A LACK OF DESCRIPTION OF THE CHARACTERISTICS OF THE WOMEN OF THE MC, I'm at 140 and the author barely describes the appearance of the women and only says that they are beautiful and that's it. So far I only remember him mentioning the hair color of the goddess Vextra and Saint Selene with silver hair and brown eyes.

The author spent about 10 chapters simply developing a Thanksgiving night, with characters going shopping for clothes, food, returning home, preparing the food, and the characters' time-consuming reflection (Cecília, especially every time she appears in the story, has to state that she will protect Adam to the death, something she has repeated about 15 times up until this point). I understand why the sun hated her so much in high school. Yes, those 10 chapters of Thanksgiving night were what made me go crazy with the novel but I'm still going to follow it.

Another bad thing is the pace of development of the heroines, which doesn't seem to progress in their romantic relationship with the MC. 270 chapters and he only stayed with one who he doesn't even seem to like yet except for sex, that sums up their relationship. sex partners and there were 3 others waiting for dozens of chapters that I won't mention the name. This is strange when the author is the same as STHK and there both the story and the progress with the heroines seem to go so much better, being that this is his second work.

Good story, if there is one thing that is a low point it is the slow pace that sometimes becomes irritating. I know it is a modern world but the slices of life are very dragged out. There were many parts (mostly reflections of the author himself) that end up dragging out the chapters.

The story starts off as cliché but gets very interesting, I can't wait for the MC to at least stop being an ugly, destroyed old man and become a tidy old man.