Very nice story, mc sticks to his unique personality and character. Though he grew too fast too strong. The original plot has gone to shit but still interesting. Only problem is that mc harem is too big, though well managed.
Ang aklat na ito ay na-delete na.
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U ripped her a new one
Excellent story with correct translation and next to no errors. Correct character and place names used. As for the story itself, it is very unique and goes deep into the lore of liyue and the genshin world as a whole while still being action packed and a slice of life kind of work. Characters have unique personalities and are all memorable. Not monotone like 3rd rate fics. Mc is very unique in powers, background, personality and way of dealing with situations. He is strong but not overly so, while having the right resources to become very op in the future. Only drawbacks is lack of romance ( personally shipping with shen he). Traveler has still not arrived in mondstate after about 200 chapters. Thanks to wiseTL for the translations, because of u I am not able to read other fics as not many are of such high quality . U owe me more chapters to make up for it.
Very poorly done. Most chapters are copied from other works. And author's original work is full of either spelling or grammar mistakes. Mc seems kind of foolish and not very driven. Just goes with the flow. Takes the original story as unchangeable and doesn't work for it. In essence he is a coward at heart. I came here with high hopes as the setting was interesting but was let down and am writing this comment. Author you better stop writing if u cannot even crosscheck the spellings before posting the chapters. This is very shameful for an aspiring writer.
Excellent writing. Very engaging. Nicely written romance. Nicely laid out plot both inside and outside Hogwarts. Characters are close to their original versions personality vise. Something new is always happening which makes it more interesting. One of the best Harry Potter fanfics.
Very poor execution of romance and the story lacks soul. No other events take place besides the original timeline events in which mc acts first. Stupidly hiding his name in third year when all the rest of his friends can easily tell the trip that he is a flamel. Lot of plot holes. And fluer is too toxic for me in this novel. The author added yuri unnecessarily. I think he was just trying to click bait female audience here. All n all very poorly executed.
Dropped. Too much long dailog in a fight pf such importance. He likes to play instead of finishing fast like the warrior he is supposed to be. Trying too hard to farm aura and instead getting none. Respect-- aura-- for both author and snape
Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting, Very poor quality, cheap story telling, cringe mc, coward at heart mc, wierd setting,
Story in itself if alright though not without plotholes but those are minor. Major problem is the very small chapter size and word padding in chapters after 150. It turns from slow burn to noburn story. And the update stability is also very poor. If u give such small chapters then atleast make it 4-5 chapters per day much like many mtl writers do here else atleast write a chapter worth atleast 2.5k - 3k at the minimum.
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