Spacyjoker

I imagine the raw is good. But the "my little sister" when referring to one of the windrunner sisters in the first chapter is immediately off putting.

I really enjoy this story on SB Think this one could get an update so I can listen to this while o work?

see I would rate it higher but if been waiting for over a month now to hopefully be able to pick up where I left off but since there's been no update on when the earlier chapters with be posted I don't think I'll be reading this. Even if I enjoyed it from where I'd read up to I can't get into the THIRD novel in a series with that amount of chapters. 600+ with not even half of them posted. ESPECIALLY THE FIRST TWO THIRDS? Just delete the story in that case.

Definitely could be better as the 1st person perspective is a nice cha ge I think. The only issue I'm finding is that every chapter has an abundance of "I" 's as in nearly every catering stats with "After" or " I" could definitely use an editor.

stopped posting chapters after 15 chapters. All are on "patron" didn't check chapter titles and just let them play on text to voice. very disappointing writing quality too. Evil Gary Sue but that comes with the territory of wish fulfillment. would not recommend for even private time as the chapters either cut off or just flat out don't have anything worth reading as it's just a short recap of previous chapter, writes a few paragraphs then adverts the patron. 0/10

can quite literally not have a MC up to chapter 54 ( which point I stopped reading/listening) there is no dialog in the entire novel, no character descriptions, no locations. no events that last longer than the roughly 500 words per chapter. would not recommend to anybody unless they want a non-fiction repetitive narration on the psychological aspect on what the force energy is. All they key words used are LITERALLY used just to get people into the novel to boost the click numbers.