Chapitre 49: Important Chapter!!!
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A/N: I find myself working on this chapter because I'm honestly unsure about the direction of the story. I've regained my enthusiasm for writing, and I want to get serious about writing new chapters. But when I looked at the story again, I noticed a lot of complaints about the grammar, especially beyond the initial discussions in the early chapters.
Then there were some readers who had problems with the protagonist, Mc Simp, seeking normality and choosing to follow Rose and Lilith, especially considering that he is an Evil Saiyan. Putting those concerns aside for now, I'm considering a rewrite.
But frankly, I really liked this part. For a couple of simple reasons, I wanted to add Rose's character, since I don't see her in many stories, and then I wanted to show Mc's growth.
For the last few chapters, I've been using ChatGPT to proofread my drafts, which has resulted in significantly fewer grammatical errors.
While the overall plot will probably remain the same, I'm considering tweaking certain elements and making details clearer to avoid negative or unfounded comments.
What's your opinion?
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If so, let me know what you liked or didn't like about the story. And what you think I could do better.
Although honestly, and most likely when I rewrite the story, I'll be looking at the paragraph and chapter comments to see what I can improve.
Webnovel and very toxic site, but I have to admit I really like this paragraph comment feature, if only them could ban the really toxic accounts that insult for no reason it would be perfect.
See you again soon <3
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