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Synopsis
1 chapter/week or not at all.
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This is my first time writing fanfic and there will be a lot of things just copy and paste. Especially in the early chapters.
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Kamiya Yato, a normal student who has the air of a low presence, died from being struck by lightning.
then Yato was given the opportunity to reincarnate in a fantasy world with Mochizuki Touya. But, Yato refuses to live in a fantasy world and chooses to live in a normal modern world.
but is the world really normal?
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The grammar will be bad and hard to read
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This is just an experimental fanfic
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I don't have anything in this fanfic
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I warned you
Class ga Isekai Shoukan Sareta
Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni
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I am first and believe it 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂.... Ok ok honest review time ..... In my opinion it might not be the best but it is the better one compared to other..... And don't take it as a hate review it is actually a honest review...... Other writer write good fanfic but because of bad review they get dropped ...... But don't worry your is better than other........ And if you get hate review( fk em who fking care about those ) So you have our support and good luck hope you make it to the top.......
This story is so all over the place that I find it hard to even describe it in coherent words. The story has NO progression, don't let everything else fool you. Tens of chapters in and the only thing you encounter is the main character misusing his powers in series of random incoherent events. There is no update stability, last chapter was 26 days ago. The world is a mix of every little generic setting you will find, coupled with other well known titles. The author somehow thought that mixing Komi-san with Kobayashi would make something good, but the plot is so disconnected that the only narration is comparable to the random babbling of a five years old child. Characters are plain, the main character has no personality, and the characters taken from other media are so badly understood by the author that I'm not sure he understands what he is doing anymore. TL;DR: the characters are dumb.
A good story, really interesting. it has a mix of worlds put into 1, MC is OP, but he's lazy af. all around good story, added to my library
I was really liking it till a child and wife he knew nothing about poped up out of nowhere while in a whole different world i mean he's still in high school for crying out loud not to mention he lives in a different universe so I'ma gonna go find something else to read it just feels random and forced
Writing quality: Ok. Although there are several mistakes but still, it doesn't affect the story much. Story development: The starting chapters are a bit copy of the novel but other than that, the idea is very good. Although I felt that it would be better if MC was not so lame. It's like reading about a useless lazy brainless MC. He have OP abilities but still can't use it properly. Character designs: Although the character of Mc was a bit lame, other than that, I think that other characters are fine. Updating stability: Ok. World background: This is a anime crossover ff. Although there are several anime worlds, I wonder if author will be able to pull up this ff. Overall: If you love lazy af MC with chilché development but fun to read plot, this ff is for you. Although I think that it would be better if MC can use his abilities with brain. Ex= He is lazy but still have to fight monsters personally; he could have used summoning magic to summon beings that are not visible to normal people or use power of Shadow Monarch from Solo leveling. Other than that, it's fun to read.
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Though I was influenced by the laziness of this story I will still write a proper review; the story is above average it's weak point is that it's cliche and the progression of the story, the good point is the chat group made it a little bit exciting and a bit of fixing of story line from the original I have a lot of point to show more but I'm to lazy LOL😑😑
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I don't find any OOC for the crossover-ed characters and that's a plus and the story it self is great, but i was kinda expecting author to improvise and not copy pasting the original Light novel for the parts of the main character's life.
I love this book so much but the author has not update it so im worried that it got dropped hope not because i want to find out what happens next ill be waiting.
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this fanfic is good even its protocopy admin just move mc not be lazy life fighting gods or romance in modern world. 😏🤗😏🤗🤗😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😑🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😀😀😀😀😀😀😉😀😀😉😀😀😀😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😋😁😚😃😄😘😊😊😍😊😎😊😊😊
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I am first and believe it 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂.... Ok ok honest review time ..... In my opinion it might not be the best but it is the better one compared to other..... And don't take it as a hate review it is actually a honest review...... Other writer write good fanfic but because of bad review they get dropped ...... But don't worry your is better than other........ And if you get hate review( fk em who fking care about those ) So you have our support and good luck hope you make it to the top.......
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This fic is just a copy of another novel, the mc character is just miserable. He has Op ability able to create any ability he wanted, but nooo, the mc just want sleep. The character development... what is this? this Fic don't have any os this. story background? just a copy and paste. Sorry, i tried, but i can't read this novel anymore. i thought that this novel would be like, In Another World with JUST MONIKA, were the world is more complex and better than original story, but nah..