BORN IN SENJU CLAN

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Gild_Rakingh

Isn't this just a translation? It is that it has made typical mistakes of the Chinese translations. How to call Naruto, hokage. And some failures in fluidity.

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DeathInside

Author..... The author simply changed the name of MC from the novel Sign in from naruto. And he presents it as his work, as he insults those who say that it is a copy :)) I think he needs to go to the hospital? So you are just rubbish author

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Ashborn2271

Its a good idea but i hope your charecter will be more developed then just following hiruzen and being a goody two shoes Hope we can see more of a dark side from him. id like for him to make his own ideas then following others command, hope we see some bashing agaisnt hokage and tsunade for what theyve caused the senju clan to become. Its a good fic till now but could do with better grammar but i guess that cause english might not be your first language but goid luck

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Shaggy_Boombastic

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Vitrialia_Amermes

Tsunade or kushina ? .... #$$&$&&#&$&$&&$-#-$--#-#-$-$-$--$-$&$-+$-$-$&#--#--$-$-$-$-#--$-$(&()&/&++$)/$)$(_((_9$9$)83)2992)2002)3)92929293)

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VEYN

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