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Synopsis
This is a story of a man named Hunter. He comes across a kingdom overrun by creatures the denizens of the kingdom call trolls. Will he survive this ordeal or will the trolls destroy him and reign supreme?
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Écrire un avisAuteur Sage_the_Writer
Good story with best character design, world background, story development and stability of updates. When I read the first chapter, I found that it still needs some minor improvements to separate between narration and dialogue, and try to write shorter paragraphs. It will be best to shorten into maximum 5 or 6 rows. Overall, keep up your good work.