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Hunter Tales

Fantasy 7 Chapitres 5.8K Affichage
Auteur: Sage_the_Writer

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Synopsis

This is a story of a man named Hunter. He comes across a kingdom overrun by creatures the denizens of the kingdom call trolls. Will he survive this ordeal or will the trolls destroy him and reign supreme?

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  1. Karensia
    Karensia Contribué 5
  2. Sage_the_Writer
    Sage_the_Writer Contribué 4
  3. Avatar
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État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire

Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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  • Qualité de la traduction
  • Stabilité des mises à jour
  • Développement de l’histoire
  • Conception des personnages
  • Contexte du monde

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Karensia

Good story with best character design, world background, story development and stability of updates. When I read the first chapter, I found that it still needs some minor improvements to separate between narration and dialogue, and try to write shorter paragraphs. It will be best to shorten into maximum 5 or 6 rows. Overall, keep up your good work.

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Lancee

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

2yr
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