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A standard reincarnation story but the author isn't paid at all
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Synopsis
Well the title says it all I'm not paid so I'll follow the standard reincarnation story but I'll add what ever I like to spice it up and what not oh by the way if you want to send mo-- .
Sakura :"HALT"!!
Author :"What"?
Sakura :"You need to tell me your not gon--".
Author:"Yes".
Sakura :"What"?
Author :"I said yes and now leave".
Sakura :"WAIT , before that can you add something to the story".
Author :"Like what"?
Sakura :"Add a lot old sexy women to fall for me yeah"?
Author :"Heh sure but I'll add a twist to it".
Sakura :"Huh what twist"?
Author:"Alright a word of advice from me kid yandere milfs".
And with that Sakura disappears into nothingness as I sit back down on my chair .
Author :"Maybe I'll make it good".
I open up my book and write across it
"HOPE YOU ENJOY".
Author:"Alright jobs done
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honestly the grammar is quite bad and kinda confusing, I very much love yanderes but even that couldn't help this one but I'll stay cause yandere but I hope the writing gets even a tiny bit of improvement
First thing's first, there is no semblance of grammar or proper structure from the get-go; that makes this unreadable at a fundamental level unless you'd like to undergo a herculean trial. The synopsis is just as bad and is an instant turn-away. Along with that, the premise is just solely uninteresting and going too meta as a crutch just leaves a sour taste. I'll remove this review if you'd like, just trying to show you that you're moving in the wrong direction here. If this is purely a hobby for you, then ignore this, but there are other platforms that are more fitting for "hobby writing".