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I have not noticed any problems in grammar or sentence structure and the plot is not far enough yet to give my opinion but it seems good for now. Also extra points for creativity with the author choosing the Abyss pathway for the mc.
More LOTM is always good. Also, wow Abyss Pathway?? Bold choice considering it already has a God, a GOO lurking to control it, 3 living established families that control the pathway and the near universal dislike of everyone else. Man's skipping Hard Mode and went straight to Nightmare Difficulty. Very interested for more.
great, don't forget to update it.... because I'm waiting for it................................................................................
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I personally love the evil MC and I have no problem with that. But killing the Children in front of his family Just because he's bored, that's something else. I don't know what you're trying to do here, But I know It's no one cares about watching MC kill everyone for no reason.
same reason as my neighbor, but I won't revise anything, just change it to my taste (I'm the one who will be seeing fanfiction that I don't like with high ratings... until today I keep looking at a good one that was dropped in chapter 10 a long time ago and until today people are putting it up)
Spoiler de révélationThe story is coming soon
Instant 5 stars just because it's a LOTM story. Though, after I have read some more, I will revisit this review and expand on what I like and dislike :)