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Itachi Sitri
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After the edo tensei was undone, Itachi gets offered a second chance by a dark being, the next thing he knows he has a twin sister, an older sister and two new parents, and they are all devils.
I don't speak English and I am using Google Translate with Grammarly to translate my fanfic. I accept corrections in the comments paragraph
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I have been waiting for a new chapter for this, but found out it was deleted. good story, so I wonder why delete?
well... I just asked him if the fanfic would deviate from the one he had on fanfiction.net, I was hoping he would say yes or no and he would have been happy but he deleted it. It would seem that the author did not expect to meet someone from fanfiction..net author!!! If you're reading this, the question wasn't malicious!!!
Writing and grammar is ok. Its full of plot holes tho. Author just completely copies itachi and keeps exact looks. Even eye color black instead of looking like a sitri. Genes are strong in devils in dxd. It can be itachi with different looks or different name but no author is lazy af. Just copy and paste so author barley tries
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if rias family doesn't want the marriage on rias either, so why did they agree to the marriage ? don't tell me they just agreed because of the pressure, the Gremory family ain't that weak that kind of pressure wouldn't affect them that much