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Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
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Synopsis
What do the words Third-Rate Villain mean?
Doesn't every human being possess their own background story?
Just because a game hadn't explored one's background story, does it mean those characters are irrelevant?
In a world where video games come to life, Astron Natusalune is introduced as a seemingly insignificant character—a third-rate villain with a minor role. However, this ordinary facade belies a haunting past that has shaped Astron into the vengeful soul he has become.
Someone who would do everything for his vengeance.
What will occur if Astron's soul combines with one from Earth? Will he relinquish his position as a third-rate villain, or will he forge a new path?
Driven by a singular purpose—to avenge his sister's tragic death and bring justice to a cruel world—Astron embarks on a transformative journey.
Witness the journey of the Astron as the young boy experiences a profound shift in his own values as he witnesses firsthand the consequences of unchecked vengeance and the true complexities of morality.
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Chapter length 1750-2500
At least one chapter a day.
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Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
Seems like a new nice story , prolly will wait until Some chapters are out before rating for real it but looks very promising
I read about 300 chapters. I just wanted to drop it multiple times throughout my reading, but I thought it will get better, so I hung around longer, but it didn't get better. ------------------- Here's the good parts of the story: - Author takes new approaches to the typical reincarnated into a game scenario. It's not just someone died and poof he's inside a game world. Also, a lot of events are properly thought out (no stealing opportunities, no utilizing future knowledge to steal from auction...etc. you know, the typical stuff you see in other works). - MC has a purpose and drive. He doesn't just want to exploit the game and get stronger for flimsy reasons. He an extreme revenge type of dude, which I like. - Characters have variety and each has a set personality and growth. ----------------------- Here's the problem with the story: - Main problem: Writing a lot of useless words and adding a lot of flowery words. Author might think that these set the atmosphere and make for nice writing, but honestly it's distracting and makes it over the top. especially when even characters talk in this over the top flowery language, like when professor Eleanor briefed students about the test. [Examples: "the rustling of leaves seems to whisper secrets and warnings" - "forming a chorus of anguish" - "a symphony of terror that pierced the darkness" - " thanks to the enhanced boots" - "this alone showed how much potential.." - "it was evident that.."....etc] All these are added in paragraphs of action disrupting the flow of battle, or when there's no combat, then it's just an attempt at using beautiful language, but it's just cringy and tiring to read. _________ Author could take a couple of points from korean novels, they don't add unnecessary expanding nor describe things in flowery words. ___________ - Another problem is that the story is dull and got more boring with each following arc. Honestly the first arc was the best one, despite the overly flowery words and cringy talks between characters, the story itself had a clear direction. The following arcs are bland. For example the latest arc I read, they went to phantoms land, however it didn't feel like there was a build up nor a climax, even the reward after everything was done was underplayed and felt boring despite the big power up. ____________ - Now my final problem with the story: It didn't feel like we went anywhere, the story almost feels stagnant, even though the timeline moved forward and the MC got stronger, I see no immediate goal in sight. Here's how things will unfold with this story: MC trains > gets stronger > gets shoved in event > fights something > gets power up > trains > event > power up.. .etc. That's how it happened in all 300 chapters and that's how it'll be going forward, it's bland and boring. Do you know why other stories with a similar set up are more appealing? It because characters have long term goals (which is present here "revenge") and they have short term goals. MC here doesn't have short term goals nor any desires. He hates demons with a passion, so it should be reasonable for him to have goals like to brutally scheme against anything demonic and go DOOM mode on them. But we don't see that, the dude just gets shoved into situations that have demons and he defeats them. Demons come to him, not the other way.
Great start. The prolo really hooked me. Unfortunately, it turns in to a first person narration and I don’t read first person. But from the few chapters I did read, I hope people give the novel a try.
Great story of underdog. Really like how the MC is weak and becomes strong. Please continue writing, really like your work. Wish that he'd get even stronger.
oh my gosh, i finally understand this guy is aphelios from league of legends 😭
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Pros: Well designed, multi dimensional side characters Well thought out magic system (not the MCs system that sucks, just the general way magic works) Good character development (especially from Irina) Absolutely amazing fight scenes (Fight scenes W main thing that kept me hooked even till now at chp 150) Not too OPMC Cons: Extremely slow paced (I've read up to chp 150 so far and he still has most of his stats at the 3 range and is pretty weak) Mid world building (Things aren't explained until they become relevant even when they are important makes it seem like author is making it up as he goes) Edgy MC (People have alr talked a lot abt this, it's not that bad but it does get a little annoying, author crosses the line of dark MC and he's just emo)(keep reading tho if you hate that, he's changing W char development) The relationships between characters develop even slower than the plot (At chp 150 he has one girl that likes him and two at a maybe but even all three of these girls only started getting interested in him like 20 chps ago, still don't know if it's gonna even be romance let alone harem) HE ALWAYS LOSES AND GETS HURT (And to the main reason I made this review, I get that he is fighting strong opponents but c'mon. He loses almost every fight and is injured all the time it is like a repetitive cycle. What annoys me the most about this is that most of the time, that was all his 'plan'. When can I see the MC winning a little? ik author must hate MCs that win all the time but it's getting annoying) Overall: You will get annoyed at this book, it has many bad elements, but somehow you will keep reading it's almost magical how I just can't seem to stop reading even now I am itching to keep going. Despite my 3 star rating, I am more invested in this book than any other on Webnovel rn def give it a go and forgive my man MC for being emo.
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I thought I was being boring while reading, but when I saw many comments I realized that most people think that way. 1st The author, to increase the chapter, gets lost a lot in useless things, using his Observation skill as an excuse, he even mentions sweat. 2nd The author loses himself in making characters alive, no matter what world you are in, even the weakest and slowest ones, will have a group, I know that the previous owner of the body avoided this so he isolated himself, but the fact that basically everyone including the teachers, who so far in chapter 30 has not been shown any reason for this to be the case, why would a teacher, an old person with life experience, waste his time trying to belittle a student, what a weak characterization. 3rd Seriously, author, 30 chapters to tell just 3 effective days of history, and in those 3 days nothing happened, which deserves the focus on the story... 4th In 30 chapters he does not mention any fact that gives him a reason to keep a low profile, on the contrary, from what was mentioned when the characters from the main cast talked, if he shows progress he would get a better and more reserved place to train, As quoted by the Protagonist of the original story, within 30 days you will already have the availability to train in better and separate rooms.
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Giving 5 stars just because the prologue and summary is interesting. But unfortunately, I feel very uncomfortable reading a first person based story. All the best!!!
To Author: ignore the blabbermouths, though I see other novels it I'm loving your ingenuity keep up man
don't usually right reviews, this is one of the best books I have read so far, good development and engaging characters.
This one is a well above most novels here. its well writen, great world building, character is not op which is a relief, not a lot of chapters so far, but it easily reaches in my top 5 just ... please dont end in a harem oh please
I don't even know where to start actually.Words betray my mouth when it comes to this novel. It's such a masterpiece of a novel that I can't properly describe it. From the character development to background of the world, everything is so well written and perfectly resembles the state of our society. My only request is that just don't drop this novel author, it is perfectly executed and I can't ask more from a novel[img=recommend]
Its a good story, even though the writing quality could be better. Also this is basically the story of Aphelios from League of Legends
Good story, good plot, a little problem here and there but it's is more of my personal preference, would reccomen it to read. I believe author Uses AI extensively (maybe for editing)but since it is for increase the quality of writing, not for lazy purposes it can be overlooked (this is purely my guess)
I liked this novel very much since I am reading More than 2 Weeks of contents in some story in 2 or 3 Days here. Since I read many novels I know the basics and even Characters in My Mind so it is good for me. But Bro if you need to get more Coins and subscribers then add little bit more sentiments and half page praising and Astonishment how MC did it. Add more inner feelings also and little bit more detailing for Characters also so that we will be connected with them. We need to feel the pain of MC and you need to add memories of his sister in Dream or as in some novel as a test of his Soul strength or as illusion tests. I am not a writer so what I mentioned above may be wrong
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I just wanted to state how disappointing it is that you abandoned a good novel to write an underwhelming/bad one. Most people have read so many "bad" novels that they've become numb to the experience, but I am not one of them. Any story that uses guns in a setting where Magic is available is one of the dumbest concepts I've ever seen used in a story. This story is also too similar to Novel's Extra, so it's almost like you started writing this immediately after you finished reading it. I didn't care much for that novel either, but I gave it a shot like I did yours. And I have to say, it's inferior to the previous novel you were writing, but suddenly abandoned. And the themes between your two novels are so similar that it's like a reboot, but in a different universe. And a worse plot. I won't be reading your novels anymore, but I wish you luck and hope you improve your writing skills.
the story is the typical weak to strong attempt, keyword attempt, because this genre usually tries to add in a sense of realness to it, thus the story either ends being really good or the lowest form of trash possible that makes it unreadable. The mc at the start is weaker than an average normal human on basically all parameters and he doesnt even have mana, yet despite being weaker than you and I he somehow managed to get in a school for super humans... how you may ask? no reason lol, he doesnt even have any sort of connection, money or academic ability, but its not like this author cares about logic, thus this story fails right at chapter 1. Anyways I didnt start reading this expecting a masterpiece so I preserved and turned a blind eye to all the stupidity and cliches right till (spoiler) the classic girl turned into a vampire arc cus vampires are cool and edgy, this arc was just too stupid and braindead to the point that I cant endure this torture anymore -_- in this arc the author went way out of his way to break the already almost non existent logic in this story, from mc letting villains injure him because a demon is seeing through them? although this was not an issue with the other villains who are even ranked higher, but if he didnt get injured the random vampire wouldnt have found his blood on the street to get a power up for by licking the blood that is somehow still fresh and get the power to turn magical girl into a vampire -_- summary: typical trash story that pretends to not be a trash story, so it doesnt offer any sort of enjoyment. And to the author if youre reading this please find another career this is really not it -_-