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Synopsis
A traveler without a system—Subject No. 88.
On Punk Hazard, he was known as the strongest experimental subject: the perfect adaptor, the sole survivor.
Souta Kiryuu carries within him countless rare bloodlines, from the Oni, the Lunarians, and the Ancient Giants, to many others long thought extinct. Layer upon layer of genetic modification has reshaped his body, endowing him with terrifying powers—searing lasers, deadly toxins, and the ability to vanish into transparency.
During the catastrophic poison gas explosion, Souta seized his one chance at freedom. Consuming the artificial Azure Dragon Fruit, he finally escaped the nightmarish prison of Punk Hazard.
Now reborn as a raging dragon, his fury burns across the seas. Souta Kiryuu will not rest until he overturns the world order itself—and slays Satan, one of the Five Elders!
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I dont get it if mc got spawn camped after transmigrating to one piece world ending up in punk hazard laboratory why mc is bent on doing it to others hunting devil fruit users to experitm them?
It's decent for sure. The idea that the MC is an experiment is nothing new for us FF readers, tho it still gives some appeals cuz it's quite interesting for some. What I found interesting is your choice for MC's DF. Usually we'll get either the MC stole Goro-Goro no Mi from Enel or the MC can eat more than one DF. But here, we got MC with artificial DF. What I found lacking on this FF is that I found many incorrect uses of names here and the pace where the MC faces the Marines and World Government is too fast.
The translation was good at the start but now the names don’t even make sense you can’t tell who’s who and talking about using jutsu even though they aren’t and clans instead of pirate crew it like you copied the whole thing into Google translate and then just pasted the shitty result
One of the best One Piece fanfic in this site. Sure there are few mistakes here and there, but I personally think they're negligible. MC is like another Rocks, but a better version because his crew doesn't hate him. And he actually does damage to WG heavily unlike Dragon who keeps looking east. MC is also not heartless. Overall a very good read, hoping for more chapters. I don't know whether there would be a harem or not, but so far no romance build up and MC just doesn't collect female members. More than half of his crew are male.
there are spelling errors but story is addictive and good.Not unique but still new and I would recommend this please read🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️
The story is fantastic. I don't understand those who say the MC is edgy when all I see is a warrior. And where's the romance or the harem? It's true the MC has several women, but the story doesn't focus on that. The only awful thing I see is the translation; the names change all the time: Araryu, Arlong, sometimes Sengoku is confused with Akainu (wtf). After that, the story is pure war, blood, and tactics.
It was awesome I loved it. I would just say stick with it you will see why it's the best. All the plans and strategies. hahahaha. 2 great wars better than marineford.
Hi! Your story completely grabbed me from start to finish😭, it felt like watching a movie play out in my head. Naturally, my brain went straight to “this would make an awesome comic😉” Since I do commission-based comic work, I wanted to reach out. I’d love to collaborate on bringing your story to life visually if that’s ever something you’d consider. No pressure at all, I just really admire what you’ve created. I’m on Discord at lunapuresoul or Instagram (lunaartsoul) if you’d like to connect or check out my art.
My brain is hurting after I read the latest chapters. The translation was so bad that I almost quit reading this ff. Some characters got their names twisted and changed (MC's crew name change to arlong pirate 😅 and we got ourselves many characters who got their names change to Chinese names), we suddenly got a chakra, the plot become so unpredictable that we readers can't keep up with the flow and pace
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It’s good the plot is solid and all only a few translation mistakes that can be ignored then after chapter 350 it all went to hell not a single name right and no longer one piece pirates become Shinobi and government become empire even emperor become great lords can’t even tell who is fighting who anymore
I was truly impressed by your story the imagery and storytelling are breathtaking. I create professional comic panels and character art, and I’d love to collaborate to transform your narrative into a beautiful visual experience. Discord: lunapuresoul
nah not for me. 2 chapters in and I am already on the verge of hating on the MC. bro is too much of an edgelord. when I looked at the reviews i already know that most are paid reviews.
Hello! I recently finished reading your story and wanted to express my sincere admiration for your work. The clarity, depth, and vivid imagery within your writing are truly commendable. Each scene felt thoughtfully crafted, and the world you built was rich with detail. As a professional artist, I would be honored to collaborate with you should you ever wish to explore a visual adaptation. Please feel free to reach out at your convenience. You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love
Es la mejor historia de one piece que eh leído hasta ahora, no tengo idea de cómo no está en el top 10 en su categoría, me casi me la termine en Dos días, espero que la sigas actualizando con regularidad me encanta [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
At the start of the story was really good but around chapter 120 he start collecting girls like Pokémon out of nowhere it kind of kills the vibe of the story