Synopsis
An ordinary fan transmigrates into Jaune Arc’s body in RWBY, only to awaken a mysterious Dimensional Travel System. Now able to jump between anime worlds to gain skills, allies, and power, he must rewrite Jaune’s fate while surviving the dangers of every universe he enters.
Warning - AU
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The story was decent up until he entered Beacon. Team CRDL is way too friendly with teams RWBY and JNPR, and it's just weird that they walk up to team RWBY's dorm for a movie night and are accepted in. Like, the story says they are bullies, and they are still allowed in. Aside from that, Beacon just feels bland and boring. In one chapter, he fights 3/4 members of team CFVY, somehow being even with them, and then just breezes past it like it was nothing. Also, the system reminds me of a DC story with how frequently it says 'stay the course, keep growing' and it's dumb. What else would the MC do besides train and grow stronger when they have no personality outside of that?
This fanfic isn't good. From chapter 1 onwards, there are some basic errors, such as Jaune already having an awakened aura, and the fic doesn't explain how or when it was awakened. Furthermore, there are some strange little errors, like at one point saying the mission notice will be given 24 hours in advance, then changing it to 7 days, and in the next chapter returning to 24 hours, along with a generally strange feeling while reading that makes me believe the fic was written by AI. In the end, I don't recommend this fanfic.
thanks for the update. don't let people get ya down just write your storyll how you want 2. doesn't have to be perfect l, after all it's a au insert fanfic so if it doesn't line up right with"cannon" so what. most the time stories turned into animation conflict with it's self.
More plzzz ,...................................................................................,.............................................
It's...quite bad. The logical leaps you must make to read this get larger and larger. In the first chapter we see that Jaune's whole family knew about his fake transcripts and then, a few chapters later, we read how every single person in his family was trained to be hunter, except him. Yes, even the baby of the family who is said to be 8 yo at the start of the story. If she was trained a few years earlier she would be about 6-7 yo...yet Jaune was not trained...he didn't even know that other people trained...that's not a plot hole, that's the grand canyon. Then we get into the fact that Jaune has 0 personality. He has one response to every and any question... So, good idea, bad execution.
Overall a readable book. Just not recommended. The MC is ok 5/10. The way this book is written 2/10. The author hasn't read or seen the anime, you can tell from chapter one. Maybe it gets better or getts a rewrite, but so far it's been a slug fest to read. Grammar is great. The chapter length is long, while the chapter updates fast. Hopefully when there more than a 100 chapters you will see improvement in the quality of book.