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TDG: Son of the Lord of the Ten Worlds
4.53 (16 audimat)
Synopsis
A modern man reborn in the World of Cultivation. The journey of Li Ming, one of the many orphans in the City of Glory, and his path to understand the reason for his transmigration to this fantasy world and, of course, reach the pinnacle of cultivation along the way.
As he discovers that he has a Baground so frightening that even immortal emperors and old immortals tremble.
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Mad confusing story, Mc's background is non existent. Most of the time was spent feeling slightly confused. Don't get me wrong the story isn't bad but rather average. It feels like reading a book that you skimmed over and then reading that book's sequel, you kind of understand what is going on but at the same time don't. The three stars is for the decent story but the plot's all over the place.
Evaluation: Has great potential (as of ch.11). WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be easily improved on most specifically your usage of gender pronouns (he, she, her, his & him). I have noticed no improvements on it as it seems you are doing it on purpose, is it an LGBT propaganda or what? 2/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5 CD: MC is a SI transmigrator but has no knowledge of TODAGverse which is refreshingly unique but his adult mentality are a bit lacking. MC handles himself well enough but there is still this 'young-master' vibe he had which is a downside. MC has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt for TODAGverse. Lacks utilization of his vast cultivation knowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 3/5 US: The stability of the upload or update isn't up to speed base on the quality of this FF. 3/5 WB: There's nothing to be discuss at since it is still at the beginning phase of the story so I'll give it as bonus as MC & author-san doesn't depend on NieLi or others. 5/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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I really like this story and the only criticism is some grammar and pronouns. Other than that it's good!
Pretty good. Now give me moar chapter ................................................................................................................
Great fanfic so far I hope you keep going all the way with this fic until you finish it. One of the best tdg fanfics I’v seen!
great potential for growth this fanfic, do not give up it is very good[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]...
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Hey author I am giving you 5 star so please don't drop this story and complete it the right way ........................ .......................,................................................................................................................
I like the story but the only think that prevent me of giving a perfect 5 is the updated sometime I thought the Author just abandon it...So I hope you can consistently updated this fanfic story
Huraay! TDG fanfictu! Please continue Alab U, from the Philippines, my name is John Peter Maria Clara Princer Borlagatan Jr. lll
I read your story and it has so many points that needed to be clarified, and the more I read the more confused I become due to the author skipping scenes and details that are VERY important so we can understand more and keep the fluidity of the flow of the story. and often it took me a lot of effort to understand what you want to say by using some very confusing expressions. good luck.