/ Fantastique / The Omnipotent System
Synopsis
what will you do if you have;
infinite skill point
infinite system point
infinite energy
omni-system shop
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let's follow our protagonist as he got transmigrated to one of his favourite novel and becomes an existence that rules the omniverse with his overpowered and Omnipotent system.
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This is a recreation of my previous Novel the Omnipotent system
Extra Chapters
200 Power Stones - 1 Extra Chapter
500 Power Stones - 2 Extra Chapters
1200 Power Stones - 3 Extra Chapters
20 Golden Tickets - 1 Extra Chapter
100 Golden Tickets - 2 Extra Chapters
500 Golden Tickets - 3 Extra Chapters
Gifts
Cola, Pizza and capsule -- Have a character with the gifter's name.
Massage Chair, Luxury Car and Dragon -- can create a character
Magic Castle, Spacecraft and Golden Gachapon -- all of the above and have their characters revolve around the Mc, can also create a storyline or plot.
This is my discord link, still working on it though
https://discord.com/invite/RyuzMVHR
Étiquettes
Cadeaux
-- Cadeau
reçu État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
Sangat Membosankan untuk membaca ini novel, saya merasa hambar. Mc tidak keren dan setiap tindakannya membuat saya bingung baca ini novel. Bahkan tujuannya/ motivasinya pun saya tidak tahu atau saya yang lupa. Novel ini tidak sedikit pun memberi kesan di benak saya Satu kata bosan
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
I don't no what to say I read up to 29 ch and it's good not very good and there is no driving factor that hook up to the chapter to continue reading is average up to 29 cb in my view and I have I complain to a mc he distribute primordial body like free to the character do not understand their value like jack and etc. I give you that author to give him Omnipotent System but it's a waste to this type of mc and why don't he bring back his parents back to like he can do that but no he went to revenge that all.
Author's review, you can ask your questions here and I will answer them to the best of abilities. thank you for reading and remember drop gifts, they are my motivation.
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
Spoiler de révélation Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
𝐇𝐢, 𝐈 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐎𝐌𝐆 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐄. 𝐅𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐨, 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐦𝐲 𝐛𝐫𝐚𝐢𝐧 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐟𝐮𝐥𝐥-𝐨𝐧 𝐈𝐌𝐀𝐆𝐈𝐍𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐎𝐍 𝐌𝐎𝐃𝐄 𝐈'𝐦 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐖𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜𝐬, 𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐚 & 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫/𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭. 𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐠𝐨𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐞 𝐝𝐮𝐝𝐞 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐚𝐧𝐞 𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐛𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐝𝐨 𝐢𝐭. 𝐍𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐭 𝐚𝐥𝐥, 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐬𝐮𝐩𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲. 𝐈𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮'𝐫𝐞 𝐝𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐦𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤, 𝐡𝐢𝐭 𝐦𝐞 𝐮𝐩 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 (𝐛𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐭𝐭_𝐥𝐨𝐥) 𝐨𝐫 𝐈𝐧𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐦 (𝐞𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞_). 𝐇𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐮 𝐬𝐨𝐨𝐧!
I like everything about it other than the fact it doesn’t seem to be updating as much and that he spends way more time bullying randoms than needed. He takes like 4-5 chapters to get his revenge for his father and himself as he is dead at the beginning and then 12+ chapters (that’s all I had the chance to read before it got too boring and caused me to drop it) toying with randoms as a form of revenge for getting looked down upon. Like here is your fathers killer on one side, now make these people who literally only looked down on you and didn’t believe your strength, let’s make their punishment like 10 times worse for no other reason than fun. Make it make sense man. Plus it just got boring after 12+ chapters of repeating things and getting nowhere.
this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel