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Natasha Romanoff-

unexpected path (marvel)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

chp289

7mth

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But I imagined that the protagonist could also do this new magic just by seeing it or something similar, and more powerful if he has the advantage of more magic, or at least easier for him to do it. just thinking about it logically. the protagonist was working at a science textbook publisher.(If this is answered in the following chapters, please ignore it, thank you)

"Me and follow the protagonist? I am the villain! And I need to make my own magic."

I am Kurt Von Ritzburg

Anime & Comics · Me_Writer

chp289

7mth

Replied to Obligation

jajaja

I got transmigrated into World of One Piece, but no system?

Anime & Comics · InstaMoist

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7mth

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Sweet Home

My Journey in other worlds starting from the world All of us are dead.

Movies · Jagadish_A_8390

chp289

10mth

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encontre estos calculos en UN wiki, nose que tan correctos esten Enel: 2.66m.Bola de oro: 4.75m.Volumen (esfera): 56110000cm^3.Densidad del oro: 19.3g/cm^3.Masa: 1082923kg Clase M.

2500kg(100%),...6000kg(50%)]

One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!

Anime & Comics · some_writer

chp289

10mth

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she could be a cop 🤔

Ce livre a été supprimé.

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10mth

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(Detective comic Fic: Vote here)

The barber:Dc

Others · John_Len_2493

chp289

1yr

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you wrote a very good fight scene

ch 11 He learned from his enemies

The tale of Sasuke Uchiha

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

chp289

1yr

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tanks

ch 82 Rei's Feelings I

High School of the Dead: Zombie World with a Gacha

Anime & Comics · Photosphere

chp289

1yr

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+1

No OC.

Reborn In Chicago Fire

TV · HiTherefic

chp289

1yr

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"Why would I have to do something like that? Demonstrations of power to reaffirm that I am better than the rest are things that those with inferiority complexes do."

My Life In Marvel

Anime & Comics · TyrantTron335

chp289

1yr

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after the timeskip where hinata, sakura and ino seemed to stay with the mc, all those interactions and chapters (I know they needed to grow but if they weren't going to be in the initial harem why focus so much on them) so they would start a relationship with naruto (hinata) and sasuke (sakura and ino) was a waste of time, then you tried to correct it for all the negative comments, but in my opinion it got worse, maybe it could have improved if it had continued as you had planned, I don't know , the only thing that I really liked was the mc it had so much potential. I don't understand all these reviews with 4.5 and 5.0 *, you are one of my favorite authors, and I love all your other fanfictions, but this novel is not one of your best works, of course this is just my opinion, and well please keep writing and good luck, (mostly Google traductor)

I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick

Anime & Comics · Einlion

chp289

1yr

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She'll be pissed years down the road for us hiding it, but I can deal with that. She's not ready now.Steadying myself, I answered him, "No. I don't think she should."