How can they join the Interhigh if they don't even know what sport are they going to be interested in playing by the time the competition comes around? Can you at least make sure to not break the logic and consistency of the story by just tossing whatever comes to your mind onto the page without actually reviewing it first please (like going to the OPM verse without preparation)?
"...and we need one more person to meet the requirements for the team so we can join the Interhigh this year."
Anime & Comics · mythoast
The way you worded this reward when you first introduced it made it sound like he could travel back and forth endlessly between the 2 Worlds, so why would it look like a single use item now? I hope its just a matter of deceiving appearances..
What was different was the fact that he saw a ticket-like paper on top of his desk slowly materializing, clearly stating a round-trip ticket.
Anime & Comics · mythoast
That's what I've been thinking all along, how stupid you have to be to simply pick up and jump into the One Punch Man universe with no special powers or even training whatsoever, I mean his base body can't even handle a taxing jug around town, and this guy randomly waltz in a World where towering monster kaijus that raze cities to the ground on a daily basis randomly appear.. like OK author I understand that World travelling sounded cool in your mind, but not having the MC be fully prepared, trained and everything for several years or at the very least, for a good training montage first, was simply moronic to the extreme and I do not accept it, regardless of the book's nature being light-hearted or not, there is such a thing as logic, and you showed less than zero for a character that seemed to plan and act so meticulously through its entire first life so far. Big, big mistake.
"...Seems like I'm underestimating this world by a large margin," Tsuna silently reflected, his hands still trembling from the earth-bending move he had made earlier.
Anime & Comics · mythoast
What kind of nonsense is this guy doing for no reason, how did he even end up in another universe to begin with? And this farce of the energy reset that needs to be reactivated? Get out of here you hack. -_-"
ch 80 Chapter 80 Scarlet Witch Panel 31%
Anime & Comics · jibrantm
Alright, let's add imaginary progression barriers to the mix, why not! -_-"
He found that whenever he wanted to break through to the next level, the difficulty would increase a lot. There was nothing in the front, but 1% will be stuck for a long time.
Anime & Comics · jibrantm
I find it funny how an author can at the same time make up such "astonishing" descriptions for the MC's powers while still binding him to such nonsense issue like the cancer cells, sure thing mate, the guy has a body that is literally in harmony with heaven and earth, but cancer though..
The feeling that 'heaven and earth coexist with him, and all things are unique to him', like all things and gods, became heavier and heavier.
Anime & Comics · jibrantm
OK nonsense BS unnecessary urgency mechanism confirmed for the majority of the book, classic trash move from a CN fanfic author, still, I was expecting them to be better than that for some reason.
I just don't know whether the cancer cells will worsen, and whether they can Until then...
Anime & Comics · jibrantm
Btw the fact that he has almost 50% of what is supposed to be a "Sun God" and the "Will of the Earth" his body is unbelievably beyond weak if he can't even overcome a few cancers here and there, wouldn't you say? Author going way too far with their forced urgency side plot to keep the MC on his toes and moving, its getting annoying, mostly because it doesn't really make sense that his body doesn't naturally overcome it.
ch 17 Chapter 17
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
Unfortunately at the time of writing that comment I hadn't realized yet that you are the same person as "My harem in DC and Marvel" which I couldn't help but drop due to the incredibly nonsesical, 50 shades of convoluted BS backstories into backstories into mysteries into intrigues, or I wouldn't have wasted any extra words or time on you indeed, my mistake.
ch 12 PAIN
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
This chapter is such a narrative mess that it is basically impossible to understand where he MC is at any given time during the whole bullying ordeal, the lack of ANYBODY noticing any of the myriad things out of place or straight up missing or robbed is beyond staggering and there is not enough suspension of disbelief in the World to make all of this even remotely believable. Still, jack him up with a million powers and I won't complain, but you certainly need to do much better next time you try your hand at writing, for real man..
ch 12 PAIN
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
You can play it cool as much as you want but ofc you care what ppl say or think about your book, but w/e, I, on the other hand, truly do not care about what YOU think since I was certainly not gonna pretend that I was gonna change the mind of a guy who already showed this much dedication and wrote over 100 chapters of this, I was just stating facts for other readers to see and agree with. Oh, and what I meant with the harem part was that all she deserves is a tiny spot in the harem, nothing else.
ch 0 4 Michelle and Peter
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
I'll give you credit where its due and say that you probably put about a hundred to a thousand times more effort than the average writer in trying to push their new-gen MJ crush up on their readers, but no matter how hard you try, you'll have to learn the hard way that regardless of how witty and likable you make her appear, besides being allowed to be a footnote in the inevitable harem, her character has no business getting involved with a Marvel fanfic MC, all other mainstay female characters of the setting destroy her both in popularity and hotness (which are the only 2 scales that actually count for the readers) with no contest 7 days 'til Sunday, hands down. Still, I'll say it again, great effort on your part.
ch 0 4 Michelle and Peter
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
It would have been more plausible for the race to end in tie because both ducks went in their separate, random direction rather than sticking to their agreed finish line.
The race ended in a tie since both ducks crossed the finish line at the same time. We smiled, admitting that there was no clear winner in our race.
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
What's up with this mixed bad selection style? What use could he possibly have of a random dog that lost to the lion in Buggy's crew? Dead weight needing of protection? A mentally immature and untrained Kuina was already fully covering that base. -_-"
Luffy turned to him and said, "I'm going to recruit him into my crew, of course!" Luffy smiled confidently after those words.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
I guess I'm the only one thinking that there is no way a sword should ever cost that much, no matter what it is or who owned it. Imo no sword should cost more than 2 bil, maybe this particular one 3, but no more. Again, your sense of value is completely off and the reviews criticising it make more and more sense by the paragraph.
These items were not cheap, far from it, but they were nothing compared to the higher-value items in the shop. From what he saw, there were incredible items available. An example was Gold D. Roger's sword, Ace, which could be acquired for 10,000,000,000 berries, or 10 billion. Obtaining this item would not be easy, as it was worth more than killing two Yonko to receive that amount – a value that only the World Nobles could have in their possession.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
I hope that you are implying that this is a showcase of how this particular author can't write an OP from the start MC because if your comment refers to ME being the one who can't handle OP MC, then you probably can't even tell the left from the right because if reading FanFic was not a waste of time, I would have been granted 7 degrees in it with 3 majors into OP MCs alone by now given how many OP MC fanfics I've red in my life, and my comment was the exact critique of how this author is building said future OP MC completely wrong, starting from contradicting his own first life principles of caution and steady training.
"...Seems like I'm underestimating this world by a large margin," Tsuna silently reflected, his hands still trembling from the earth-bending move he had made earlier.
I Cook My Way Through The Multiverse!
Anime & Comics · mythoast