Webnovel Author: anubis1650 - Fanfic Collection

I have to say one thing I have an issue with the main character is he doesn’t want to sow his oats, most 19-year-old. That never had a girlfriend who gets reborn and popular would definitely be getting his groove on. I’m not saying go all harem monster on it. But he would definitely be sampling the variety pack before marriage.

I have say the only thing bad for me in this story in the lack of the mc using any modern knowledge even if he introduces the new cooking concepts, that would be great he has already complained about the food it is not exactly hard tell them about cheese burgers pizza battered fried chicken or fried fish.

I keep expecting him to say to grap for evil to triumph. All it takes is for good men to do nothing

I think it’s more of a matter of pride, challenging a higher bounty and winning. Give you bragging rights

Hodor became mentally disabled because Brendon Rivers using the were wood network(remember the dude is hooked up to a massive tree) mentally crippled him so he would hold the door(hodor) when bran needed him to for the future

I highly suggest you remove this blessing or change it at least. If you can possess any person it just makes the story in my opinion irrelevant one of the main taboos of Wargs which makes it so it's not overpowered is they cannot possess people without serious consequences. I believe bran only possessed Hodor because he was mentally disabled think about it you want to get rid of someone or anything like that all you have to do is possess them and make them go on a murder spree or something it just makes everything kind of pointless.

While I get the whole King and Prussia and such and King Robert recognized him as the King of Prussia they're not really saying anything about the king of Westeros which I think would generate a lot of problems if that is not acknowledged.

I think you might have got a little too overboard on the blessings but that's just me

I only know a handful of fanfics that dispose of her in the right way. Which means horrible or funny kind of wanted to read about her going on a 7 rant and a giant punting her between two towers then make a goal sign lol.

I truly don't know what to say if he thinks a better environment for your son/nephew is to send them to the coldest Dam miserable place ever with murderers rapists and thieves and think it is a better environment than Winterfell that should probably tell you're doing something wrong. Oh and best yet don't forget the malcontents who've lost the Rebellion who now have an easy target to take out their frustrations who can not fight back because that's going to work out so well. At that point in time it might not be worse if you tell Tywin Lannister he's a bigger joke than his father then send him to casterly rock lol.

👍 Thank you for the clarification

Is there a picture of the armor or a concept look it's based off of right now considering it said something about a long coat on picturing Kirito from sword?