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I really liked the new take on Harry Potter. Esp with the added lordly duties which I havent seen on other fanfics. Though as usual with harems, theres just too much sex chapters. The whole novel with more than 180 chapters is just all about harry potters 4th yr in hogwarts. and you have alot of chapters that are really long. Overall it has alot of potential. its just too bad it seemed to be dropped.

Made this review when i reached chapter 11 so it might be too early. So far, world background has been very detailed. I like the concept very much and i do hope the author keeps pumping out chapters on a regular basis. oh btw, congrats on the new job!

Honestly i was surprised at this fanfic. I was just trying out different GOT fanfics when i stumbled on this one. Kudos to the author. you really did a good job. You tied together pretty much everything in this fanfic in a logical manner. well theres the help from the sith powers but that always comes with a fanfic. Thank you!

Overall i like this fanfiction. We all know how the story of HP goes, so its good that the author decided to change alot of things. You really do have to read through it to find out how it will turn out. Though i was a abit taken aback by the whole different powerful bloodlines culminating in harry. And yes, i do like the fact that harry's partner is not hermione. As im sick with alot of fanfics using hermione as the number 1 female mc.

You will love or hate this novel depending on your preference. For those who like action packed and fast paced novels then this is not for you. As for those who prefer deep and logical world building then this is a gem for you. I honestly am surprised with the amount of details the author put in this novel. As sometimes it became difficult to read due to having alot of explanations. The author really did try to explain magic in a very logical manner. Unlike other novels where you just see magic as is without understanding how it really works in the world building. On another note, this novel did try to do away with the childishness of the whole Harry Potter series and made it more adult like. Like some readers, I would have loved to see the continuation after graduation. All in all, fantastic novel.

Hmm, as far as Ive read, its mostly japanese. So im not sure if you are just generalizing them. Mind you, in novels its usually portrayed that chinese and japanese people dont mix good. If not downright enemies/rivals. When it comes to the plot, true it may have a few cliche scenes but thats normal with a theme like this.

I have read novels with pretty much the same idea. What I liked about this one is that it is more realistic compared to the others. Given that the MC has a cheat system but the MC started really from the bottom and nothing too ridiculous. Other reviews are right, it seems quite slow but thats fine. Also, I like the fact that the MC is not an arrogant punk (thank god). If I would suggest something to the author, you could try adding comedic parts since you are not going for a novel with a revenge/serious theme. Overall, very satisfied with this novel. Hoping for the author to keep it up.

I have read upto chapter 265. I can honestly say i got tired of keeping track of his cultivation issues. MC has 4 bloodlines, three kinds of power system, uses multiple type of weapons (which also needs individual cultivation for each). That in itself is already a handful but, you are still trying to make him do other kinds of cultivation. while still keeping his power realms the same even though he can fight people with levels way above him. To top it all off you introduced the MC as someone very smart like being able to figure out peoples motives, playing with people or finding out clues to lost and forgotten realms/ruins from folklore. BUT he keeps making mistakes that are common sense. his accumulated age is more than a thousand years Sir author, I can tell you have thought alot about this novel given how detailed it is and how you try to explain everything. But its getting too toxic.

Honestly, i do agree like the others that this novel has potential but there are just details you put in there that made me drop it. the thing that irritates me the most was the switch with classes. assassin gets a hunter master class and a hunter gets an assassin master class. You might have reasons or plans for this but its seriously putting me off. also i honestly dont get how a real life super assassin bullies guilds with hundreds of players while he couldnt even kill a team with 3 players who somehow could launch a surprise attack on him. Try to be consistent or at least put in more attention to details.

Like other reviews, this could've been better made. The beginning was typical of this genre which is to be expected. I read until chap45 and majority of it was just about women and relieving himself of his sexual tendencies. You could even say that the system and him levelling up are being relegated to the sidelines.