Webnovel Author: CouchPotatoDandy - Fanfic Collection

Why did the MC idiotically just kick him in the back?? why didn't he decapitated or stabbed him???

How am I supposed to know that?🤷

I hate it when the author continues to portray the MC as mentally unstable, it's as if the MC can snap at any moment and go on a killing spree....

I love it that the MC is acting smart about things and not rushing head in foolishly.

I think the MC should have been harsher on Nightwing. Who died and made him the boss demanding answers for the MC actions? Also, doesn't it seem like everyone is just following the MC without him noticing anything? Since he received his drone I thought people won't be able to tail him anymore and yet they still does as if it's nothing....

Thankfully he wasn't blackmailed, if he was I would be way too disappointing to continue this fanfic. Not threatening intended here, just my honest thoughts.

So let me get this straight, I'm here to read about a fictional figure in a fanfic yet that same figure doesn't want to be fictional so he is having mental breakdowns that stops him from getting strong? Yeah that is going to make me so hooked up to this traffic...

So for some reason a week after getting into a new world the MC experience a mental breakdown, one so hard he would rather die than use the system points?? Sounds way too cliche and forceful...

So the MC still think it's smart to save his points even after he almost died two times now in one week? I think the author just wants to keep the MC still weak for the beginning of the fanfic...

So the MC still think it's smart to save his points even after he almost died two times now in one week? I think the author just wants to keep the MC still weak for the beginning of the fanfic...

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

Did the MC name change from Xiao Li to Nie Li all of a sudden??

Let's list the flaws in this chapter: 1) He says he doesn't care about people in Glory City, yet in his previous life he died to say random innocent people... 2) The author doesn't give any explanation about how the MC suddenly got Haki and Shadow Clone Jutsu... 3) He's currently at the Bone Forging Stage, yet he is somehow going to in one week skip the Spirit Gathering Stage and get to the Innate Stage??

This is definitely an awesome fight, but just like all the other fights in this fanfic it drags too long... I really can't get used to a fight that span 5+ chapters, it makes me just skip the middle chapters to get to the end...