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First, the grammar is giving us cancer sometimes (and English is not even my native language, even some mtl are way lighter to read than this) Apart from that, as other comments say, your are making the MC way over-ordinary and it's start to pissing us off, his improvements are too slow, etc.

MC doesn't think or plan enough, he's so far kinda dumb, leaving almost everything to luck, I don't like this, hopefully the author will make him mature or at least start using his head a bit more.