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Alright, I am not going to write a review on this novel, simply because I think its (almost always) unfair to write a review after reading only one chapter. And I am not going to read more than one, I am sorry. You English is just too awful. I don't mean to offend, please don't be upset - I want you to improve (or better, write in your native language and find a translator). As far as the first chapter goes, it's too much nonsense. The boy is a prisoner, but they didn't search him and didn't take his spacial storage items? There are other things that are illogical and don't work, but this is the biggest one.

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What is this ridiculous showing off? Is he so sexually frustrated he must impress any first girl that talked to him? This is so out of character for Jimmy, I can't believe what I read in this chapter. Is the Spirit already corrupting his soul or something?

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Its not a bad story, and it escapes the usual tropes. Yes, the country "Vermillion" is basically China, but its not super nationalistic, its more or less realistic with China's current world ambitions and pull power. Its getting destroyed with the rest of the world anyway, so who cares really. The MC is supposed to be a clever type, but realistically he is just a guy who plans ahead and is reasonably erudite about sciences - i.e. he knows what is EMP and stuff. :D The decisions he makes don't particularly strike me as "smart", more or less just plain reasonable - which is good enough, compared to some other MCs. The huge downside is that the book is WORDY. Like, lots and lots of irrelevant side-tracks and details that nobody cares about. Its a river of words flowing from inside the hero's head about literally everything that he looks at and what is going on. The dude is talking to himself in his head and we get to be annoyed with that exposition after exposition. After reading the first 5 chapters I just started "scanning" the pages skipping whole paragraph where nothing happens but some mundane stuff is discussed, repeated, revisited and munched over and over. The meteor FINALLY hits after 20 chapters. And the next 20 are even more boring with the guy sitting in the bunker. For the second 20 chapters only 2-3 events happen, I won't spoil it for you. In any novel of better quality the first 40 chapters (and not short ones too!) would fit in 4. So, if you don't have life to live, this novel is for you.

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