scum brown nosing begins.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 - Long Time
Eastern · Salted Fish Jienan
If you had a perfect memory erasing and healing technology, would it be alright to torture people if you heal them and made them forget afterwards? This "simulation" is good enough for people living in it to be self-aware with emotions, logic and desires. "Just a simulation" is not an excuse, very much like its not good to torture people if you can make them forget it afterwards.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 - Long Time
Eastern · Salted Fish Jienan
Thanks for the reply. To clarify, most of frustration comes from the way you chose to do the synopsis. If was dramatic, it ended with a cliffhanger, I was excited and then I open the actual book to... normal school stuff... more of normal school stuff... **** self-esteem drama.... >:-O
ch 0 2 An Unexpected Call
Games · Dweia
"the world of deities." its here on webnovel and its good
Alright, I am not going to write a review on this novel, simply because I think its (almost always) unfair to write a review after reading only one chapter. And I am not going to read more than one, I am sorry. You English is just too awful. I don't mean to offend, please don't be upset - I want you to improve (or better, write in your native language and find a translator). As far as the first chapter goes, it's too much nonsense. The boy is a prisoner, but they didn't search him and didn't take his spacial storage items? There are other things that are illogical and don't work, but this is the biggest one.
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What is this ridiculous showing off? Is he so sexually frustrated he must impress any first girl that talked to him? This is so out of character for Jimmy, I can't believe what I read in this chapter. Is the Spirit already corrupting his soul or something?
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Fantasy · grimofdoom
What constitutes "energy" tho? I am not trying to play a trick here, listen me out. If pulling out an item spends charge proportional to the item's _full_energy_ as physics understands it, then by formulae E=mc^2 it is absolutely impossible to recharge the USB with any modern power source, even industrial one. Clearly, its not how this is working in the novel - charge energy limits weight and size of an item, but its not _full_energy_ of the item that is being the "equivalent energy" for cost. If for some reason thorium or exotic fuel is a special case, you can pull your standard sci-fi FUSION REACTOR that works on regular hydrogen/helium gases - easily obtainable and cheap. Pull the portable reactor, buy fuel for it online.
ch 31 VR Headset
Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
No way?! The author-sama is back!!!
ch 24 IRatAPS Novel Competition!
Action · smithnj
Water filtering chip.... Cuttlefish, you cheeky bastard
ch 13 A Sense of Ritual
Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
OK. The first two chapters were interesting enough, but here I am off this ride. Layton was supposed to have mistrusting asocial personality, and now he is best friends with a person who he met just today? I could ignore this - pretty girls do weird things to boys' brains after all - but the style of writing went down as well, its all "tell, don't show".
ch 0 6 Can You Keep A Secret?
Sci-fi · Immanioripse
And in real world everybody will die eventually anyway from old age or something else. It doesn't give people right to murder each other, just because sooner or later people die on their own ;-D
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 - Long Time
Fantasy Simulator
Eastern · Salted Fish Jienan