How did you manage to make the pokemon world into some type of generic cultivation novel. 'Talent' come on really.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 : The World of Pokemon
Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
Why doesnt he just spend points on a big nuke of a skill instead of all these meh skills. Firebolt weak machine gun, multi firebolt weak machine gun still, fire atro turret weak machine gun... Guy has infinite mana, just get a small nuke and spam it.
ch 40 Chapter 40 - Returning to the Surface.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Cool background, revenge, restored body. Cool. Stupid system... what a shame. Ruined the story, getting 'characters' makes the world feel hollow, having a bunch of stuff given to him is pointless. Guy struggled to become OP yet now you've mary sued him its making him boring.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
Anime & Comics · Anfractuous
10 chapters in and the numbers already slipping. 15 minutes for what? Shaved 20% of the hp instantly.
ch 10 Unexpected Turn
Games · XiaoKongxu
I'll give context, the way its written it bad english. The tenses are all over the place and it doesnt flow well.
ch 0 7 Amulet of Chaos
Games · XiaoKongxu
Literal children flirting? Bro.
ch 10 Banter Brushstrokes: A Playful Palette of Teasing and Flirting
Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
Kingdom building is boring to read. May as well go read a wiki page.
Skipped that entire arc.
ch 23 Departure #23
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
Wow, what a waste of time. Can tell this is a translated novel. The amount of useless words in here is staggering.
ch 95 Throwing Dire Claw Knife!
Games · Grand_Void_Daoist
Its unreadable. One of the worst written fics ive seen. Reads like a crack fic despite it not trying to be. Guy has not discovered apostrophise so thinks using colons for talking is appropriate. Honestly why even put this trash up.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
It reads so weird. Doesnt sound like any of the characters at all. It reads like a wikipedia page.
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 Treatment
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444