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Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
love the story so far, the MC is chill and logical. i hope and am eager to see more of this
Anime & Comics · Izana07
good story, love the shadow approach. make a patreon and stick to the story please, all the good earning writers try to finish 1 in 2 stories at least to keep an audience.
Book&Literature · Vencha
too much content, too much description without story advancement, you risk making a good character an edge lord, and there you will loose the story and your audience
Anime & Comics · illyisabot
love the story so far, i hope you stick to it. will you reveal the year where the story take place or are you hoping to divorce the story from reality ?
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please no pokephilia but other then that i agree : more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Anime & Comics · kurit_kun
thats a good phrase
you have a magnificent sense of humor, i know this site doesnt encourage good writing but please continue to grace us with your brand of insanity ^^
Anime & Comics · ShinXResolve
love the story so far
Anime & Comics · LaughingSnowFox
good story so far
interesting debut, hope that you continue the story
Anime & Comics · ValidateMaker
happy to have you back man and i hope the story continues
Movies · pujimaki
i love this story, the character is engaging and the pokemon and world are in an interesting balance between dark and canon. the only thing i fear is that the farm is taking a long time in the making and the pokemon are pilling on
Video Games · Nuclide
love the story and i hope to see you continue it
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
love the story so far. i think you want the mc to explore and thats the best kind of pokemon fanfics. i hope to read more soon
Anime & Comics · Fini98
the story deserves 5 stars. the power progression is interesting and the character is engaging. the only problem i can see manifesting is that you are spending too much time with the main cast of HXH, the most exciting thing about your approach for star wars was that you took to exploring some lore and giving the mc the liberty to disengage from the constrains of canon
Movies · GnomeBob
love the story so far. relatable Mc and logical power progression
Anime & Comics · ExoticSenta
love the story so far, no instant op MC with some good natured and relatable characters. hope to read more soon !
Anime & Comics · TrojanRabbit
love the story so far, i just hope the flaws of the character can be resolved without edgy traps
Anime & Comics · Turtle034
i had my doubts when the author deleted chapters for a rewrite but the results are excellent and the story is better for it. the quality is descent and getting better. the character is in need of development but we are just 5ch deep so i think it will come with time
Anime & Comics · Zeckan
Contenu pornographique Haine ou intimidation Divulgation d’informations personnelles Violence Pourriel Autre
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Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry