What I’m aiming for with the edits is to make their interactions feel more natural and less robotic. I’m adding a human touch to their conversations and their thoughts about each other to make it more engaging. If you’re interested in experiencing a more refined version of the story and gaining a better understanding of the characters, I’d definitely recommend rereading it from the start. However, I’d suggest holding off for now, as it might take me a little while to finish editing everything.
Disguised as Harrison Wells.
It's 2014, and I've spent nearly 14 years living as Harrison Wells. Not by choice, of course—I despise having to live in someone else's skin. But I needed to fast-track the creation and explosion of the particle accelerator to regain my Speed Force, which was lost after meddling with the timeline. The disguise was necessary, but the goal—recovering my speed—was all that mattered.
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Eobard Thawne
It's 2014, and I've spent nearly 14 years living as Harrison Wells. Not by choice, of course—I despise having to live in someone else's skin. But I needed to fast-track the creation and explosion of the particle accelerator to regain my Speed Force, which was lost after meddling with the timeline. The disguise was necessary, but the goal—recovering my speed—was all that mattered.
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As the thought dawned on him that he might have somehow been pulled into the world of The Flash, the accelerator detonated. Swayam, frozen in disbelief, was struck by the residual energy of the blast, sending another jolt of excruciating pain through him. His vision darkened as he collapsed into unconsciousness, the world around him slipping away once more.
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Then came the lightning—not the usual blinding white streaks, but vibrant bolts that shimmered with every color of the spectrum. He had never seen anything like it. The first few drops of rain splashed against his face as a deafening clap of thunder shook the ground beneath him. The multicolored lightning intensified, merging into a single, colossal bolt that streaked directly toward him.
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How to pronounce Swayam: 1. Sway-am: with the "Sway" sounding like the word "sway" (as in to move back and forth), and "am" pronounced as it is in English. 2. Swa-yum: where "Swa" sounds like the beginning of "swarm" without the "rm", and "yum" like the English word "yum". Also I have given him the "Sam" nickname, if anyone has trouble pronouncing the name "Swayam".
Swayam, a 24-year-old orphan whose life had been an uphill battle, sat on the balcony of his rented fourth-floor room, lost in thought about switching jobs. Despite the hardships he had endured, he carried on with quiet determination. But something in the air shifted—an abrupt coolness swept through the city, accompanied by an eerie stillness. Swayam looked up, puzzled by the sudden change in weather.
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Updated that part. Hopefully it will be easier to understand now.
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In DC?
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