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Realistically speaking, that doesn’t happen anytime soon. Best bet would be next season after Jake has put on more weight in addition to strength/height. I’d guess that since he has started bulking, he has at least put on 5-10 pounds. Would be more confident in him being able to hit curve-like/breaking ball pitches out of the park after having at least reached 150 in weight. Would love to see that happen.

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Have no particular dislike for your novel. It’s simply on hold for me as of now as there aren’t many chapters to read, along with it’s somewhat slower pace. If there’s a single thing I’m not particularly a fan of, it’d be how the MC is stated to be an existence to be wary of(OP) and what not, but even up to where I’ve read we readers still have no clear understanding of his strength or standing. I saw you reply to another that you don’t want to bombard us with info-dumps, but there are too many things which are unclear to us and may come off as being overly-mysterious which can be a bit frustrating to read after a period of time in my opinion. When this novel has reached, say 150-200+ chapters, I’d be a lot more inclined to begin reading again as I’m hoping various things will have been answered by then.

Really don’t understand how the MC can see all that he has in his vision, and still go about things like he isn’t facing a crisis. I’d expect him to be taking steps to prevent that future or at least be prepared for it, but his focus is this inconsequential wedding that I’m absolutely sure will end up in disaster.

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